Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/19/08 12:11
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

Very clever. I think you've just answered the question I set in the Badger Bar.

The tension you created in this story holds all the way through.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/09/08 15:31
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

Trust the Malfoys to worm their way out of troulbe again. This was excellently written, especially Narcissa's answers, very quick thinking on her part. Well done.

Reviewer: mrsmcclnt
Date: 08/14/07 16:00
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

Yes.

The defense had a very powerful and moving argument. As a parent, I can understand the defense's case. If I hadn't read books 1 - 6, then I could almost believe in the Malfoy's innocents - that they did what they did for the sake of their son.

And just when I thought that Narcissia would have gotten caught in a lie with her Legilimency, you turned things around with:

Do you think, given the strong emotional bond between a mother and her only son that I would have made the best teacher?

That synched the verdict for me. It's no wonder he got away with it.

Your writing style is simple yet very descriptive. I love how people can word things to get their point across.
Like here:

Morris felt movement in his groin. God he wanted that woman.

You went deep there with his lust. It was bold (very bold), but I love that cause it got to the point of his feelings for her.

Great Job.

Reviewer: Luna_and_Harry
Date: 08/14/07 15:49
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

will there be any more chapters? *Pleasepleaseplease*

Reviewer: Luna_and_Harry
Date: 08/14/07 15:48
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

ha! thats funny. just wondreing... did morris ever do anything w/ narcissa???

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 08/14/07 15:47
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

It was really smart of you to write a fic on the Malfoys' trial. I think it's a really creative and original idea. You did an excellent job! I myself am also a very huge Law and Order fan! Great work!

Reviewer: Luna_and_Harry
Date: 08/14/07 15:37
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

heeheehee! FIRST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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