Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/01/08 16:52
Chapter: ....

I really like how you portrayed Sirius. He seems a little older than eleven because he's been brought up to be respectable, yet he still continues to remind himself of what his family expect, what his mother says etc. James seems very likeable and it's not surprising Sirius would end up being friends with him as they both seem capable of delivering witty comments and putdowns without becoming unpopular. Great fic.

Author's Response: Oh, thanks, Binka Fudge. I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed it, and that you liked Sirius's portrayal in here. This is just always how I've seen his character as a child, and I'm glad you thought it worked well. And yes, James and Sirius definitely make a nice pair of friends! rn

rnThanks again!rn

rn~Megan

Reviewer: charlie black
Date: 08/22/07 13:59
Chapter: ....

I like it when James tells Sirius that McGonagal was ready to put out the flames.
I laughed.

Author's Response: I wrote something that got a laugh? Really? *Thinks she's a horrible humour writer* That's great to hear.

I liked that line a lot too, charlie black, and thank you so much for leaving a review.

~Megan

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 08/22/07 12:59
Chapter: ....

i think that sirius was very believable! his mom actually seemed kind of nice though, and i thought that he had ALWAYS hated his family and wanted to be in gryffindor.... but anyway good story!!


Author's Response: Thanks, JustLikeHermione77, for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

Yeah, Sirius's character sort of changed in DH in terms of age 11 than from when I'd written this fic, but I'm going to be stubborn and go with my own envision of him. *Ignores several DH moments that'll contradict her belief*

As for his mother, I don't know. I didn't want to portray her as too heartless just yet, just frustrated with some of her son's more ... less than presentable behaviours/appearances.

Thanks again, though!

~Megan

Reviewer: MagickalEveningStar
Date: 08/22/07 12:51
Chapter: ....

very good. looking forward to reading more of your writings.

Author's Response: Thanks, MagickalEveningStar.

~Megan

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
Severus's Prince by DestinyMoonStar Professors
What does Severus Snape do when a one night stand turns into a baby boy? ...
Other Lives and Dimensions and Finally a Love Story by MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd Professors
The year is 1977, and the Wizarding World is in turmoil, but it doesn't really...
FEATURED
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...
CATEGORIES