Reviews For On the Run
Reviewer: William Brennan
Date: 12/01/12 23:48
Chapter: Chapter 3- Inner Battle

The thought processes are maybe a little overdone, but it's a good, realistic progression from the events in the book, to what would have happened, but not been discussed later. I can definitely see Harry's slightly overdeveloped sense of honor making him pull away like that, but I can also see him offering to come down and warm her up after months with no "romantic" activities, so that part's quite good. Next chapter??

Reviewer: HuffleClaw27
Date: 03/16/10 12:49
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

Being a diehard R/Hr shipper, the only thing I can say is that good, realistic H/Hr
fics make me angry for some reason and this chapter just did that. Excellent!

Reviewer: lementations
Date: 07/13/09 14:36
Chapter: Chapter 3- Inner Battle

are you going to write another chapter? Beacuse that was awesome!

Reviewer: lementations
Date: 07/13/09 14:30
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

cool! awesome.

Reviewer: lementations
Date: 07/13/09 14:23
Chapter: Chapter 1- Ron's Depature

that was awesome! i can't wait to read the next chapter. i wonder if she really felt like this.

Reviewer: awesometwo
Date: 07/12/09 2:57
Chapter: Chapter 3- Inner Battle

great just waiting for more chapters :)

Reviewer: -Rosette_Potter-
Date: 10/16/08 8:58
Chapter: Chapter 3- Inner Battle

OMG, great! I love it!

Reviewer: rold3
Date: 09/14/08 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 3- Inner Battle

Please, this is good, you can finish it.


Reviewer: ren_a87
Date: 07/21/08 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 3- Inner Battle

Sorry I didn't review sooner, I've been a bit offtrack since summer began! Anyway, another great chapter and I hope the next one comes out soon! I like Hermione's battle with herself because, well, I think we've all been there at some time or another wehther it was over a boy or something else.

Author's Response: Haha no problem, thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: bighpfan23
Date: 03/12/08 22:46
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'll try :D

Reviewer: ren_a87
Date: 03/11/08 19:28
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

Don't worry about it, I was just wondering! Good luck with it all. Why are they not accepting your chapters?

Author's Response: That is a good question haha. I have no idea, and I've posted multiple entries per se at the MNFF forums, yet they continue to ignore me. : ( So sorry

Reviewer: ren_a87
Date: 03/10/08 21:44
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

Are you still writing this story?

Author's Response: I have posted this in comments and on my profile- type thing. MNFF has not been accepting my chapters and will not listen to my pleas. : ( In April, I will finally be free again and will try to persuade them that they shouldn't delete my chapters with no letter. So sorry.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/01/08 21:38
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

Damn, just when it was getting good, the dang fool gets up and leaves the poor girl high and dry. How rude!

Author's Response: Hehe. Well you dunno what he will be doing in the near future.... XD.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/01/08 21:30
Chapter: Chapter 1- Ron's Depature

It is always nice, and good for that matter, to have a choice, especially when it comes to choosing a significant other. Why settle for a dud when you can get the stud?

Author's Response: Haha!

Reviewer: tyman
Date: 01/25/08 18:40
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

Great chapter can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: ren_a87
Date: 01/19/08 9:32
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

Hey, I saw the chapter up, but now it's down. What happened? I hope they accept it soon!

Author's Response: I have no idea! Ive submitted the chapter four times, each staying on for a week or two, then disappearing. I posted on MNFF forum, but they havent responded and that was a month ago. So sorry to everyone!

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 01/03/08 18:00
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

? Update?


Author's Response: ha i wish. I havent received a rejection letter, nor have I received an email for that. I have the chapter all ready to go, but they wont take it. Sorry :/

Reviewer: rebelangel110192
Date: 01/03/08 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

? Update?


Author's Response: Ill try again right now, but MNFF enjoys ignoring my new chapters. We'll see though.

Reviewer: searchingforthesun29
Date: 11/14/07 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 2- Confusion

again... LOVED it! please update soon!

Author's Response: as soon as i can! i promise!

Reviewer: searchingforthesun29
Date: 11/14/07 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 1- Ron's Depature

that was great! i loved it! thanks for a great read and on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: why thank you :D

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