That is a great story I love all of the woman scorned stories.
Well done, this is a great story. You are a very good writer. Your language flows in such a way that I forget I am reading fan fiction and think I am reading a published work!
Great final line, especially!
Author's Response: Thanks! Especially about it reading like published work (I've finally begun an original fiction). Thanks for the review! :)
I loved all the little flashbacks. And the ending line really got me. Beautiful piece, although I like A Woman Scorned more. Keep up the great work! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! It's probably going to be a little while before the next Alphard and Regina story comes out, but I do intend to continue writing about them.
This is very nice. I love how you keep filling out the characters you developed in the original A Woman Scorned one-shot. Keep up the good work :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, I really love getting to write about the Black family. I'm hoping to have at least one more story about them.