Reviews For A Fresh Start
Reviewer: PeppermintToads
Date: 03/14/12 16:54
Chapter: Full Circle

I really liked the ending of this! You are a really awesome writer. Good job! I especially liked Ron's "Gryffindor Pride" robes--that was a wonderful touch :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had so much fun writing this story and am really glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 03/10/12 3:44
Chapter: Full Circle

Oh! Love this! Will you do a sequel?

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

I've considered a sequel before, but decided that I need to finish at least one other novel-length project before starting a new one. But who knows? Maybe one day Scorpius, Rosie and Albus will begin a new adventure.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Eponine
Date: 07/09/11 17:12
Chapter: Great Expectations

What a lovely story! I was so in the mood for a good next generation story, and this really hit the spot!

I love that you focused on Scorpius. I always thought about how hard it would be for the Potter and Weasley kids having to live up to their parents' fame, but it never occurred to me how hard it would be to deal with the consequences of your family's mistakes. I thought your portrayal of Draco was particularly strong, and I loved your Scorpius. Their relationship was one of the best parts of the story I thought.

Great job!

Reviewer: emvln92
Date: 02/07/11 8:30
Chapter: Full Circle

GREAT story!! There are a lot of stories about the next generation getting in trouble but you managed to make a fresh story that didn't seem like all the others! I love how you threw in the toad named delores, Gilderoy Lockhart, and a Wii! it just made it that much better and funnier.

Reviewer: emvln92
Date: 02/06/11 19:56
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

the toad named dolores is a bit of GENIUS on your part!!! i literally laughed out loud when I read it, and my non-potter literate roomate was soo confused :) great story so far, I really like it.

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/05/10 15:50
Chapter: Caught Unprepared

Twist! What will happen to Rose? I guess I'll have to just read and find out, right?

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/05/10 15:05
Chapter: For Every Action...

I like the twist. My guess is that we'll see a little more Bernard soon. Keep it up!

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/05/10 14:55
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

I'm liking this now. I should have known that Albus wouldn't be good at potions.

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/05/10 14:46
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

Oh my gosh! In my story I am keeping in my head, Luna and Neville are married, too! And, they have a daughter named Alice! And. . . a Malfoy, in Gryffindor? That idea seems popular, though.

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/05/10 14:33
Chapter: Sins of the Father

Twist. I bet that I'll be seeing more of Rose/Scorpius action, though. Can't wait!

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/05/10 14:25
Chapter: Great Expectations

Wow. I'm liking this. I really hope you keep writing more stories.

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 08/14/10 20:15
Chapter: Full Circle

Loved it!!!
I never thought on this perspective, but it made a fine story.
Do you plan on any sequels?

Reviewer: PrincessJasmine
Date: 01/05/10 21:36
Chapter: Full Circle

this was the best next gen fic i've ever read!

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 10/07/09 1:22
Chapter: Full Circle

Absolutely precious story! This story makes me really like Draco Malfoy, since he learned to put aside his own personal prejudices, even offering to put up the ransom money.

The story is awesome, and who could have possibly guessed that freaking Lockhart was one of the villains! And Smith, we always kind of knew he was a slimy creep.

Very nice work!

Reviewer: Boudahmim
Date: 03/09/09 12:44
Chapter: Full Circle

I do like this fic. It's calm and touching. The whole analysing the constellations is interresting. I hadn't realised some of the names came from stars. Well I had for Sirius', and Draco's. By the way, the explaination of how Draco is always there in the sky is pretty cool.
I would have enjoyed a bit more Draco Ron Harry Neville Ginny Hermione interaction... Mostly Draco Harry Hermione, I'd have been pretty interrested. But I guess they're not the center of the story so... Too bad Harry isn't developped. He doesn't show any personality. But like I said, it's not about them, so I'll shut up now. ;D
thank you!

Reviewer: Boudahmim
Date: 03/08/09 16:32
Chapter: Great Expectations

wo! I'm only at 1st Chapter but already I like it! I like your Draco. He's both very changed and yet in character somehow. I mean it doesn't sound fake and that's quite something! I really look forward to reading the rest!

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 01/16/09 7:30
Chapter: Full Circle

That was great! Thanks!
Glad that Scorpious got the map, neat ending. Hope you will write more about them.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/03/09 23:21
Chapter: Full Circle

Thank you for writing the story! I'm sincerely hoping you'll write more stories along this vein. I love this group of characters and would very much enjoy reading more of their adventures.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/03/09 22:59
Chapter: Guess Who's Coming To Dinner

Betterer and betterer. I love this add on. I'd really love someone to write a fic that has Dudley's kid going to Hogwart's.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/03/09 22:36
Chapter: A Few Trips Down Memory Lane

Love it. The chapter was very well thought out and written. There was absolutely nothing farfetched or unbelieveable. I'm still liking the person Draco is becoming, Scorpius is a great kid and doing a good job of bringing up his parent's.

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