Reviews For Despair
Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 19:08
Chapter: Despair

The people we love never really leave us, they're always waiting at the end of the tunnel.

Author's Response: How true...

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/10/07 3:02
Chapter: Despair

My favourite line:

I wish upon the stars
For time to turn back

I just really liked the idea of Harry wishing on a star cuz Sirius is after all named after one. I liked how you showed that.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad someone caught on to that! I love the idea that so many characters were named after stars and constelations! (Draco is one.)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/09/07 19:53
Chapter: Despair

*sniff* :( good poem!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Please don't cry! It makes me feel sad when people cry...

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 12/09/07 17:03
Chapter: Despair

PS: You are the next Edgar Allen Poe...mwahahahaha! Did you know that Edgar Allen Poe stayed with Thomas Jefferson when he went to the college Jefferson started? I read that on wikipedia when I was working on my inquiry project!

Author's Response: *Sniff!* That is so touching!

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 12/09/07 17:00
Chapter: Despair

Awww! You rock, voldiegirl! Can't wait for more of your stories! See you tomorrow!

Author's Response: Thanks! I wouldn't have been able to do it without you! :)

Reviewer: Gamma Orionis
Date: 12/09/07 14:57
Chapter: Despair

The simplicity of the poem is actually really nice--it emphasizes how life can so simply take a perilous turn w/o warning.

However, in the line "I know you won't come back" you could have also used "I know you can't return to me", which would have sounded more poignant. Since your last line was "For you to return to me", it could have been like a poetry mantra of some sort, haha. Otherwise, very touching. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Can I change that? If you don't mind I'd love to use that!;)

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