Reviewer: Russia Snow
Date: 05/24/09 15:59
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

I really enjoyed the twist you gave the poem, it made me smile, especially the "He spoke not a word, but went straight to work,
And filled everyone’s stockings, even Percy the jerk." This made me giggle.
I maybe would have added a few words to some of the lines to improve the flow for instance "Away to the window I flew like a fly
I went so fast I thought I’d die." I would change that last line to "Thought that i'd die" As i think this extra word improves the flow of this line. But I really enjoyed how you took a well known poem and made it totally your own.I loved some of the words you thought to rhyme! Well done, and keep writing!
Russia xxxxx

Reviewer: ritaskeetertobe
Date: 12/13/08 15:19
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

I absolutely LOVE it! It's hilarious!
I especially liked the language you used to describe the things everyone is doing!
I think it would be really cool if you did a couple of these--using different Christmas songs or something!
Merry Christmas!
~margaret

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 10/10/08 19:38
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

What an excellent poem, funny and sweet at the same time. I can imagne Mr. Weasly doing that! I really enjoyed it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :-)

Reviewer: Phoenix_tears08
Date: 02/18/08 14:36
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

WICKED i love it hehe

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: bubblegumpinkhair
Date: 01/27/08 13:09
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

Ha this was so cute!!

My favorite parts were "not a creature was stirrring, not even a gnome." and "he filled everyone's stocking, even Percy the jerk." They both made me laugh!

Anywasy I really like your style and your really creative!! Keep writing!!


Author's Response: Aw, thanks, I'm glad I made you laugh. I have another poem up, if you want to check that out *wink wink* ^_^

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/17/07 23:46
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

That was really well done. I can quite see this happening at the Burrow and adding Percy the jerk set it off really nicely. Good luck with the challange.=Sammy

Author's Response: Aww, thankie! I love the Percy the jerk part- it suits him nicely, doesn't it? But, actually, this isn't for any challenge, 'cuz it doesn't fit into any category. But that's okay! Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Courtbrat
Date: 12/17/07 19:51
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

this was very cute I loved how you changed the story to sound like that good job

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: fifinella
Date: 12/17/07 19:11
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

This is a lovely adaptation of the classic poem. A pleasant read as cooler weather has finally setlled in here.

Cheers!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! (Wow, I've said that for every review ^_^)

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 12/17/07 15:11
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

Cute, very cute!

Author's Response: Aww shucks! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 12/17/07 11:56
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

Twas the night before Christmas,
And all through the home,
Not a creature was stirring,
Not even a gnome.


^thats the best XD

Author's Response: Thanks! That's how I got the idea... that part just popped into my head. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Wolfie Jojo
Date: 12/17/07 11:33
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

Ha! That's so funny! You managed to get it to rhym without sticking useless words in there. I can never do rhymes: I envy you...- I'm still laughing, you know. I think my mom thinks I'm choking, though it'd be nothing unusual. It's going on favourites!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! You made me smile. You don't have to envy me... it's very hard to make words rhyme and sound good. Er, I hope you don't choke! ^_^ And thank you so much for putting it in your faves! that means a lot.

Reviewer: Pottergirl6
Date: 12/17/07 9:50
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

This is very funny! You made clever twists!

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was funny! That was my intention. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hpluvit
Date: 12/17/07 2:53
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

clever, very clever

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you thought it was clever!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you thought it was clever!

Reviewer: lilyevans489
Date: 12/17/07 1:57
Chapter: A Weasley Christmas

Ha! Good job. Some re-adapted poems don't rhyme, or rhyme really badly, but your's was really well done. Get some more up soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The idea just sort of popped into my mind, since I had wanted to do a Christmas-y story. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The idea just sort of popped into my mind, since I had wanted to do a Christmas-y story. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Oh, and you're my first EVER reviewer! Congrats! ^_^

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