Reviews For Fighting Otter
Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 19:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hermione has more strength than most would think at first glance, that's for sure!!!

Author's Response: Yeah!

Reviewer: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357
Date: 07/20/08 10:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

I think this was a very accurate depiction of Hermione. Perhaps you could have mentioned how afraid she was because it lacked the fear and tension she must have felt at Malfoy Manor, but I'm just being picky. I really liked this and I'm going to go add it to my favorites!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review! Hm, I'll consider that advice, I might make another stanza...

Reviewer: bubblegumpinkhair
Date: 02/02/08 14:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

OMG this was so good! *adds to favorites* Definitly Hermione!! It was a perfect length and your writing is really good! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Angel Feathers
Date: 01/19/08 14:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

LOve this, it totally captures Hermione's personality and the Gryffindor spirit!

Author's Response: Thanks! GO GRYFFINDOR! *does embarrassing cheerleading move that lands me in the hospital*

Reviewer: RavenclawDiamond
Date: 01/18/08 12:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Was the otter refering to Hermionie's patronus?

Author's Response: Yes! :D

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 01/14/08 15:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! I love it. Great job with the ryhming. I especially loved the last couple lines.

Keep writing!
~fawkeshermione



Author's Response: Thank you! I love good reviews! :D

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 01/13/08 1:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

An interesting poem but not intense enough for this situation I feel. Sorry I'm feeling a bit cranky. But if it was your first then it was a very good attempt.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks for the critism! It's not my first, but it's my first poem that isn't free verse.

Reviewer: Voldamortisevil19
Date: 01/11/08 21:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww! Awesome! I love this thing, 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 01/11/08 17:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was an interesting event in the book to choose to write a poem of. I think you captured Hermione's bravery well. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I try to find moving events to write about. I really honor Hermione's bravery, and think that chapter was a life-changing chapter for her!

Reviewer: lilyevans489
Date: 01/10/08 21:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

Short and sweet. Well done.


Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 01/10/08 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* poor hermione!! good poem!

Author's Response: Thanks! I just think of how loyal she is to her friends, I wish that I could be as awesome as her! :)

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 01/10/08 18:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

You are the "best friend who pwns," Luna!

Author's Response: Ooh! I would have never guessed...

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 01/10/08 16:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cute

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 01/10/08 16:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. That was AWESOME!!! You are such an amazing poet. That was really powerful. By the way, JATA got in!!! *cheers for herself and her awesome best friend who pwns*

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm wondering who this said "best friend who pwns" is, she sounds really awesome!

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