PLEASE UPDATE SOON THIS STORY IS REALLY AMAZING SO FAR!!!
Lol ....umm yeah not funny but sort of funny with the whole Fred and George thing....wasn't suscpeting the slap though nice
Great beginning :)
I like what you have done so far. When is the next chapter?
When will you continue? I'm hooked.
Don't know where you're going with this, but it is very believeablr to think this might have happened to Harry. You captured him well so far.
Hello, I have always loved the idea of Harry and Hermonie simply because they seem to understand each other so well. The way you have written these chapters has just been magnificent! I hope you will write more soon!!
Oh. Em. Gee.
I just sat and read through all the chapters that are up, and was so disappointed and eager for more when I reached the end! I love the way you write and portray the characters - everyone is spot-on, and I very much believe Harry and George would be affected this way. It's all so realistic, well done!
I love the humorous bits, the banter and the small moments. And I love that you have Ron and Hermione bickering over the kiss, it's priceless! I'd never thought of it that way, but I could very much believe that this would be the reaction, and not at all that they jump into a relationship and all is good after DH... Ron's still very immature, and I can't see them having a functional relationship just yet.
That said - as a Harmonian, I think you're portraying and building up Harry and Hermione's relationship very good. Please don't rush things just for the sake of it, or because you think there's no action in the story, because it's wonderfully realistic as it is..!
I enjoyed every single sentence of your writing. And I can't wait to read more! Keep up the GREAT work, this is the best H/Hr fic I've read in a VERY long time!!
u probly 4got bt in england we call a bachelor party a stag night and a bachelorette party is a hen night. :)
love harrys litl alcohol lapse. love hw hermione is a pushover wen it comes 2 ron
lovely start. gr8 climax at da end!!!!!!
Wow this hasn't been updated in over a year! Are you still around and writing? 'Cos if you are then I really hope you continue this fic! I love Harmony!
Author's Response: I'm definitely trying to write it. I'm in my first year of college, so it's been pretty busy, but I'm going to try to work on it over the holidays! Keep checking!
I love this! This is exactly how I think Harry would be after the war. I don`t think he went on with his life, happy like nothing happened. He would feel guilty, sad and manage to blame everybody`s death on him. I hope you update soon, this is a great story. :]
The whole thing is done really, really well. I think you portrayed the characters brilliantly, and I like seeing things from Hermione's perspective. I love the way that you show Harry as being different, cos how could he not be after all he's been through? Oh, and I loved the bachelor party. I thought my heart would actually break!! Can't wait to read more, keep it up! xxx
OMG! Loved it, I was really just taken away by the realness of it. I am a HUGE Ron/Hermione fan of course so I want this to end well for both of them. However the way you have written this wonderful story it makes me rethink a few things. Poor Ron,he never was the brightest crayon in the box now was he? I cant wait for an update.
Interesting..I never imagined Harry as the sort of person who wouldn't be able to deal with it...then I guess that's sort of the point...everyone expects more of him. I feel sorry for Hermione though, it's just like Ron to be so blindly stupid like that, very good characterization. Great job...hope we'll be seeing an update soon. :D
the plot thickens
i might actually finish this fan fic
its a good start
ill be reading on
wow realy good again. i dont really have any comments other than "really good".
really good. Ive read alot of fanfics, so ive seen many "harrys" and his "fazez" and this is defenatly one of the most interesting. i never thought someone would write as harry having trouble to cop. after the war. im also reading the one about george going to wiskey to cop with the loss of fred. keep the good work comen.