Reviewer: E Crawford
Date: 04/25/08 12:35
Chapter: Chapter One

wow this is wonderful. write more.....

Reviewer: E Crawford
Date: 04/25/08 12:35
Chapter: Chapter One

wow this is wonderful. write more.....

Reviewer: mirimos
Date: 03/09/08 22:53
Chapter: Chapter One

omg its not harry and cho pairing is it!? :O
or susan Bones
or hannah abbott
or lavender brown
or parvati/padma patil
or daphne greengrass
or pansy parkinson
or fleur
or ron.... :P
i'll try to read it

Reviewer: Reader4ever
Date: 03/08/08 20:16
Chapter: Chapter One

Great first chapter!
I love Brethany; she seems like an amazing character...and I can't wait to see where you go with this!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 03/04/08 13:32
Chapter: Chapter One

I like her attitude!! Last line is especially funny.

Author's Response: That's actually a paraphrased quote. My mother was a teacher many years ago, and she related the story of her first day, and how the headmaster said something very similar to her.

Reviewer: darknessofnight
Date: 03/03/08 17:23
Chapter: Chapter One

Good story, where's the rest of it?

Author's Response: It's coming! We all wait with baited breath as the next chapters are validated...

Reviewer: darknessofnight
Date: 03/03/08 17:21
Chapter: Chapter One

Good story. HATE the name Brethany though. *extreme shudder* sounds weak

Author's Response: Oh, dear; no one seems to like Brethany's name much. Thankfully, I didn't name her after some dear old relative, so I'm not offended. Thanks for the compliment on the story so far!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 03/02/08 23:55
Chapter: Chapter One

Oooh! An alternate book 6 fanfic now? What a treat!

Author's Response: Yes, an alternate book 6. I refuse to believe that Dumbledore died, the old coot. Furthermore, I don't believe Severus is so foolish as to have made that silly oath! I'm not certain that the horcruxes will even show up in this AU...

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 03/02/08 18:53
Chapter: Chapter One

*grins* This looks very promising! And perhaps some *nudge nudge* romance between the Potions professor and Brethany (who, by the way, has a very interesting name)? Don't mind me; I pair everyone and everything. This is really good, though! I look forward to seeing more.

Author's Response: Am I so obvious? I'm uncertain about a romantic relationship between the two, but there are some definite sparks flying between Severus and Brethany. Here's a hint: they enjoy arguing with each other entirely too much...remind you of anyone?

Reviewer: Caledonia
Date: 03/02/08 18:20
Chapter: Chapter One

Great start! It will be interesting to learn more about the new DADA teacher.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy Brethany as much as I do.

Reviewer: mirimos
Date: 03/02/08 17:55
Chapter: Chapter One

if you make this an h/g pairing I will be your best friend plus i'll r/r every chapter ;)

Btw good start. can't wait to see the next chapters. Is harry going to wallow in pity and be saved?

Author's Response: Sorry! Unfortunately, I have written my very favorite pairing into this's not h/g, nor is it h/'ll simply have to wait and see.

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