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Reviews For A Ripple In Time

Name: Sainyn Swiftfoot (Signed) · Date: 03/29/08 12:51 · For: Time-Turner
A very gripping story! I was forced to read the entire thing, it was so exciting! It was also very well written except for a few typos:

“and it was totally warn.”
I suppose you mean “worn”?

“Ron quickly put his satchel in front of is face”
I think it should be “his face”?

“having a feeling of dejvu.”
It’s déjà vu, right?

Overall, good story!

~BB

Author's Response: AWW! Thanks badger boy! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a fun time writing it and Ron IS my favorite character after all. Keep an eye out for my two new stories coming up! ;)


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/21/08 14:59 · For: Time-Turner
oh i liked this
this is the first time travel story ive ever read it was really really good really well writen although at first it was a little hard to follow
bellatrix was ppppeeerfect
keep writing great stories!!!!!!

ttfn ta ta for now
XOXO
~lola~


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