Wow, that was very interesting. Thanks for posting this.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
very good. i can totally image crabbe doing that, and his confusion as to why harry was not in the rafters as well was priceless. awesome writing! =D
Author's Response: Thank you!! This was very different for me to write, and I'm glad it's gotten such a positive response!
An interesting change of pace from most of the other Battle stories. I love the way you characterized the deceased as they realized and reacted to their own deaths. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
This was really well written. And an interesting change of tune. I'd have never thought to write about Crabbe of all people. The idea was brilliant! Very, very awesome : )
Author's Response: Why thank you!! I can't take credit for the idea - it was a challenge on another Harry Potter site I visit and I decided to try my hand at it. I'm glad to know I did a good job of it, though!! Thanks so much for reading!!
That was really great :D Excellent word choice, and I think Crabbe's point of view was about as dead on as one could get. It was totally worth waiting weeks and weeks to read!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I totally wasn't expecting any reads on this (much less reviews!), so I'm quite pleasantly surprised that it's actually being enjoyed. Thanks so much again!!
Nice! I like the POV you chose and I think you did it really well. And that last line was a great way to end! Thanks for the good read! :D
Author's Response: You are quite welcome! Thanks for the flattering review!!
well done. well done indeed.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
On the contrary, this story is not the least random, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I think the confusion and just plain apathy suited Crabbe perfectly.
However, my only complaint about this story is that some details of the battle are out of order. Otherwise, great story!
Tim the Enchanter
Author's Response: Ack, sorry about the continuity issues!! I didn't have DH on hand when I wrote it (opting to trust an increasingly less-than-reliable memory instead...) I'll fix it as soon as I can.rnOtherwise, I'm glad you liked it!
