Reviewer: sarcasticval
Date: 09/26/13 1:41
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

I beg of you, please please PLEASE don't let this story be abandoned. It is truly one of the best Snape fics I've ever read. I still check it all the time in hopes of an update.

Reviewer: Lon Wolfgood
Date: 10/11/12 13:33
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

Wow! 16 more days and it'll be a year since the last chapter!

The sad part is that I load this page daily to see if it was updated, since there are no alerts in this website. Or maybe I just don't know how to use this. Ha!

Any chance of this being uploaded to FFNet or AO3?

Cheers!

Reviewer: Charles Sinclair
Date: 08/08/12 6:54
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

I hope that you haven't entirely abandoned this? (Though as the writer and of several incomplete chapters of an unpublished story I can understand how you might).

It is still the best thing that I've come across in a long while, and I still have the chapters saved to an external drop-box. As I may have said before, the ethos of the story puts me in mind of Atonement; and you balance a brilliant tightrope walk between the desirable and believeable. Its quite satisfying to have some closure in this manner.

All the best, and I'll keep periodically checking under Authors for updates!

Charles

ps 'Dirty old Town' - a 'The Pogues' reference?

Reviewer: Phoenix Song114
Date: 06/21/12 3:41
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

Hmmmmm interesting....cliffhanger! Haha nice!

Reviewer: Phoenix Song114
Date: 06/21/12 3:30
Chapter: Chapter 17- Dirty Old Town

Hahahaha nice one, Lily. :) Love that girl.

Reviewer: crissiferrobin
Date: 06/03/12 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 1- The End of the World

This is my favorite story! hank you for bein brilliant!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 05/29/12 5:58
Chapter: Chapter 1- The End of the World

Oh what to say? I absolutely adore this story and I especially love your characterization of Snape. I feel like he and Lily really do deserve to be together, because of the way you have written them. Oh please up date this story!!!!! This is going into my favorites, and I would love it if this story could actually be finished, too. You have such a fluent writing style and you are able to get into the characters' heads really well! I feel like I understand and appreciate them all a little more. :D So please continue this story!!!!

Reviewer: Lon Wolfgood
Date: 05/07/12 23:13
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

By the way, I forgot to mention, that I really liked the professor and how he helped Severus.

Reviewer: Lon Wolfgood
Date: 05/07/12 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

Loved this update. Still the best SSLE story by far.

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 02/09/12 1:22
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

Somehow I missed that you had updated! I'm glad to see you back. I'm really curious as to where this story is going. I hope your writer's block is gone for good.

Reviewer: Darkmond
Date: 02/07/12 22:17
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

Hmm... This is a hard thing to write a comment to a fanfiction.
I rarely do it, cause what can you actually write to a thing, that you simply find “AWESOME”?
You must admit that it’s rather quite a poor comment even though that’s exactly what I think about your work. I rarely find or have the occasion to read something, and I mean here even books, that have such an impact on me and gives me so much excitement while reading, as your story. It’s just a fanfiction, but I actually have the feeling that you give Rowling’s characters the depth I was missing in her books. That your story revolves around my favorite character in HP have surely something to do with me picking your story to read… But the fact that even the point of view of characters I previously despised, or simply found boring, got my utmost interest... I have to say, that this really shows a talent of a great writer. Just to view such things, to makes them present and visible, this really shows how much potential you have. Cause it’s really hard to make it this way, despite what others think.
I have this habit, that while I read a FF I underline the parts that I find the best, it’s either witty dialogs, responses, interesting situations and descriptions and any parts that I on my part find quite inventive, outstanding, or just simply well written. It would surprise you how many parts are underlined in your work.
I will buy your book, if you ever have one. Without any hesitation. It would be worth solely for your deep psychological insight.
I was wondering if you ever thought of it, if you tried to think of any story yourself.
Unfortunately there are no such sites in which people can post their own stories, mostly cause of the author’s rights that could be violated. A pity though… I’m sure many people could discover their gifts this way…
But coming back to “Snivellus and the Head Girl”, I’m always full of fear considering the great FF works, that one day the author just stops continue writing them. It takes so much time and work, after all. I really hope you’ll have the strength and determination to finish this FF without the need to let it down in the middle.
And I really hope that you’ll try to write something by yourself.
Be assured that I and all your fans on Mugglenet and FanFictionNet will continue to support you and keep reading this great fanfiction till the very end. I’m sure that no one is able to stop doing so, after getting familiar with this fantastic story.
Keep writing, and have a lot of fun doing it,
With kind regards,

-Darkmond

Reviewer: FwooperFeathers
Date: 10/30/11 2:38
Chapter: Chapter 1- The End of the World

WOW. You are truly an AMAZING writer. I can totally imagine all of this--and you do a great job depicting the characters!

Reviewer: jkjim
Date: 10/29/11 20:20
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

Yay update!! Release the Mongoose!!!.

PS.
Please kill the marauders

Reviewer: lunalicious
Date: 10/29/11 19:33
Chapter: Chapter 18- First Day

I'm enjoying this story and can't wait to read what comes next. :)

Reviewer: Minerva67
Date: 10/28/11 18:32
Chapter: Chapter 1- The End of the World

Yaaaaaay A new installment of my favorite fanfic. This was a good transition chapter. I am sure many at Hogwarts would wonder why James Potter, of all people, would be selected as Head Boy. You have explained well the dearth of talent in the upper years of the school. Also I like seeing the story from James's POV----but don't give us too much of that. You do have to give James credit for some talents. He is popular with some students, certainly has athletic and academic skills, but assumes that everything will come to him. His bullying probably caused more by his privileged life and thoughtlessness, rather than a basic meanness and recklessness. Good for James to finally realize that he has to change his attitudes

Reviewer: Lon Wolfgood
Date: 09/17/11 23:02
Chapter: Chapter 17- Dirty Old Town

This is the best Sev/Lily story I've read. I hope you continue it! :)

Author's Response: I'm still working on it! I've just been sidetracked for a while. More soon, I hope, and thank you!

Reviewer: Maria Elena
Date: 09/16/11 3:02
Chapter: Chapter 1- The End of the World

I don't know why this review appeared after the first chapter. I've read all chapters.

Author's Response: I think the computer system just does that sometimes, from what I can tell.

Reviewer: Maria Elena
Date: 09/16/11 2:59
Chapter: Chapter 1- The End of the World

What you've written, it's absolutely amazing, marvellous, fantastic, I love it, I love it. I wish you wrote sth more, beacause it's a breath-taking story, I love Sev in your story. ;) Lily is just as I imagined her to be. I'd like Severous eventually won her.

Reviewer: wellalwayshavehogwarts
Date: 08/21/11 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 6- Death Eater Boyfriend

Whenever I hear "You've Got to Hide Your Love Away," it always reminds me of the impromptu living room waltz. Pretty great detail. Thanks for making it memorable!

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 08/06/11 23:06
Chapter: Chapter 1- The End of the World

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