Reviewer: harryfan100
Date: 12/14/09 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story was so funny...even if it probably wouldn't happen anyways

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Im_No_Muggle
Date: 12/05/09 12:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was hilarious! Eveyone was perfectly in character, especially Dumbledore. Is the darkness spell actually in the books, or is that something you made up?

Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, I made that one up. I have given a great deal of thought to how many spells a student from Hogwarts would know after each year of study, so I like to throw some new things in my stories that I think a wizard or witch should know, but perhaps didn't find a place in Rowling's work. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/03/09 21:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was too wonderful for words. I went from thinking there really was a race--I guess I don't know the Weasley twins very well--to roaring with laughter and having to hold my stomach because it hurt from laughing--meeting Peeves and McGonagall were the funniest instances--to feeling so sad and sorry for Neville because he had been duped to laughing again as Neville cruised past Dumbledore and then it was just too much when he approached Snape. The ending was superb. You really had to respect Neville for what he did. I loved this. No wonder it won an award.

Author's Response: Actually, I just found out that I won the award, so I have to say I'm rather stunned. Thank you and everyone who have responded so favorably to this little diversion of mine.

Reviewer: weasleywannabe47
Date: 08/13/08 20:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Dumbledore was so IC!I really enjoyed this story!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Feel free to tell all your friends about it and send in a nomination for me to win Best Humor Story! If I win, I'll be sure to send your bribe money out with the next owl.

Reviewer: SpoonForkSpork
Date: 07/25/08 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

awesome. loved it. especially dumbledore that was great writing

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm getting a lot of positive feedback on my portrayal of Dumbledore and I'm glad to see the trend continue.

Reviewer: hebridean black
Date: 07/16/08 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was great. i really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Lily_Luna_Potter
Date: 06/05/08 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

This made me laugh so hard! It's a bit perverse, but I think it's brilliant. Dumbledore was the best - I don't think J. K. Rowling herself could have written his lines better.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Anytime someone compares me to the master, no matter how undeserved it is, I always smile. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Magic Muffin
Date: 05/24/08 19:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, That would kill! I would much rather get hit by a raging bull and lighting (and live!) then streak through my school!
I enjoyed this so much, I think I'll give it a smiley =D

Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I'm definitely in agreement on the streaking thing . . . I'd rather suffer the Cruciatus curse than streak anywhere.

Reviewer: JOHN91043353
Date: 05/13/08 9:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

ROTFL, That was so funny. You should write more humor.

Neville seem to have discovered the great joy of streaking.

Keep up the good work.(I know you will.)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As a matter of fact, I do have another humor story planned, but it's a bit far down on the priority list at the moment. Still, be on the lookout because you never know when a short story is just going to pop out in the middle of something else.rnrnThanks again for the review! Now, I must go for my daily nude run around the neighborhood.

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 05/09/08 3:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oi! That was great!! Go Neville!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Kcharles
Date: 05/07/08 20:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was very funny! It was very beliveable that the twins would do something like that to poor Neville. It shows his own Gryffindor braveness and courage too. I loved how Snape was right there too! When nothing else could happen wrong, it does! Poor Prof. Flitwick though!

Good job, and keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. One of the hardest things to do when writing fanfic is making the characters act in a way consistent with what we already know about them and I try very hard to do just that in my stories on here. Any time someone says my fiction is "believable" it always adds a little to my pleasure upon reading what you have to say. Thanks again!

Reviewer: lioness_of_magic
Date: 05/07/08 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hahahahahahahaha wow this is great!!!!!! Neville really has guts :D

Author's Response: I think we've known Neville has had guts since the scene in the common room from Book 1. For the most part, though, the application of his guts to the overall story was overlooked until Deathly Hallows. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 05/04/08 14:18
Chapter: Chapter 1


Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 05/02/08 14:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very funny indeed. Tho' I feel sorry for Neville being (if you pardon the pun) the butt of the joke.

Author's Response: Neville's motto should be, "That which does not kill us, makes us stronger." If not for the endless mirth at his expense, I doubt that he would have been able to find the strength to play the role he did in the final battle with Voldemort. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 05/02/08 13:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

You have way too much time on your hands and a very sick mind. Congratulations on getting this past the moderators with a 3rd-5th year rating, and I hope future stories from you won't be as... off. I did like Dumbledore's part of this. The ending was also very funny.

Author's Response: Alas, the one thing I have a severe shortage of is free time. I do appreciate someone who notices my sick mind, though. I think it's one pleasant aspect of my writing that often goes unnoticed. I'm not sure what you mean by my story being "off," but I can only shrug my shoulders and hope that you find the rest of my writing on here more "on." Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: potterfan48
Date: 05/01/08 22:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Fantastic! Loved the story. A new nickname for Neville "jiggles".

Author's Response: Yes, we all knew that Neville was made of pretty firm stuff. Unfortunately for him, none of that firmness made it to his backside. Oh, well. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/01/08 22:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

That story was so hilarious! Neville streaking in Hogwarts! *signs* Who knew Neville would be bold enough to bare his ass (er, arse) in the midst of many professors? Love it! And how is the Golden Sepulcher?

Author's Response: Thank you very much! As for Golden Sephulcher, it had been on a temporary hiatus while I've been working on other projects that I might, at some point, receive some payment for. In addition to that, I have 60 hours or so a week at work, my daughter's softball practices, my son's t-ball practices, Girl Scouts, etc. Writing has been slower, but I recently joined the 21st century by buying a laptop and hope to take advantage of my newfound mobility to get more work done. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 05/01/08 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh this was so cute!! and funny!! Absolutely hilarious! Poor Neville goes through alot to save his sanity, including bustin' it past Snape! So cool! And to use the darkness spell, awesome!
Snape probably turned inside out, wondering what happened to that little dunderhead, Longbottom!
Hope Neville's gran soes'nt hear about her grandson's streaking adventure!
Great story!!

Author's Response: Thank you! As for Neville's gran, you know what they say in the wizarding world--what happens at Hogwarts, stays at Hogwarts. Or something like that.

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 05/01/08 21:21
Chapter: Chapter 1


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 05/01/08 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

lol! wow! i laughed out loud in some parts! haha i really liked it! dumbledore was so in charactor!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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