Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 11/16/10 6:44
Chapter: But soft!

Aw, that was so sweet! You know, I never really imagined Frank and Alice to be like Romeo and Juliet but now I come to think about it, you're right! The awkwardness worked, because their personalities have got just enough Neville in them to keep their characters unique. Great story!!


Author's Response: Thank you, Soraya! I really appreciate your review, and I'm glad you could see Neville in their characters. I actually think that they're not at all like Romeo and Juliet, which is something Alice needs to learn and why they are so very cute (romantic they may be, but R&J are not very cute). I like this couple a lot, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! *D*

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 05/29/09 22:17
Chapter: But soft!

I love this fluffy, cute story. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Have a great day. *D*

Reviewer: HungarianWitch
Date: 04/17/08 12:23
Chapter: But soft!

Aw, how sweet! And really well written! And thanks for writing a Frank and Alice story, it's a pity, that there are so few of the kind out there!

You gave them very lovely personalities! I laughed when Alice started to talk right after he kissed her, it was cute!

It definitely goes to my favs! And I will check out your other stories! :D

Author's Response: Yes, there really aren't very many Frank/Alice stories out there. I'm glad you liked this one. I hope you liked others that you read as well. :) Have a nice day and thanks for your review! *D*

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 04/16/08 21:53
Chapter: But soft!

Wow. Just wow. I love this story! The first thing that attracted me was the witty title--we're reading Romeo and Juliet in my English class. You captured Alice and Frank so well. Frank was so awkward, making him so adorable and completely believable. This is one of the most well-written romance fics I've ever read. Please write more!

Author's Response: I have written more, just not with Frank/Alice. You might consider looking at some of my other work; if you enjoyed this one, you might like others. Thank you so much for your review! Have a nice day! *D*

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