Great story, very detailed. Nice job, it shows that you are not without reason one of my favourite fanfic writers on this site. (I especially liked your notes at the end ;p)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, luinrina. I love getting your reviews, and you compliments are making me smile! Oh, and A/Ns at the end ;) ... Yeah I have a lot of fun writing those. Glad to hear you're enjoying them!
I really liked it. I've never seen a fic like this before, but this was really neat. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you, Soph. I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed it!
First of all good fic. I think that you have characteised James' shall we say confidence very well. However you also mention his parents, and as Jo says that he was an extra treasure to them, I think that you grasped their relationship well, at least it is how I imagine it to have been.
Author's Response: Thank you, Elf01. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you liked James's portrayal. (Yes, his 'confidence' is what we'll call it ;) I agree.) The way I've always seen James is that his life pretty much seemed perfect, save for his death - and even then, he and Lily got the best deal when it's compared to the rest of their friends. Again, thanks for the review.