Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/13/08 18:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was so beautiful, you've really captured what love might be to someone. A few small things like suffering through Quidditch matches, laughing at jokes that aren't funny etc, it must be wonderful to feel so much for someone that you'd do anything for them. even fight a war to give them a better future. The comparison between the endless, cloudless blue that is the sky and Gideon's eyes was amazing, I often find on days when the sky is like that, it's impossible not to stare up into it and get lost. I love fics that make you feel, and this one certainly did. It also made me think of memories, when Sophia wanted to remember what they were laughing at in the picture. It's funny how when you lose someone you can't remember everything and it does hurt, but I suppose remembering the best moments and the things that person taught you honours their memory. Sorry I've gone all mushy, look what you do to people.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the wonderful review. I had such a horrible day today, and you don't know how nice it was to see this. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it! :D

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