Reviews For A Love Poem
Reviewer: namtsho
Date: 01/28/09 10:41
Chapter: A Love Poem

It's an EXELLENT poem. I love the first verse! You did a lovely job and I am sure that you are a born poet! Keep writing! :) [Sonam Tshomo]

Author's Response: Why, thank you! That's so nice of you. Smiles, Luna

Reviewer: ILRW4
Date: 09/16/08 16:59
Chapter: A Love Poem

This is really good, I like it a lot. I hope you'll write more, I need to learn to write them better.

Author's Response: Practice is the best teacher. I don't know if I'll go back to sonnets, but I do enjoy poetry. I like my poetry to be a little less stuctured.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 09/02/08 15:32
Chapter: A Love Poem

Oooooh really great poem! My favorite line was:

You saved me once when I was but a year
On Halloween, that dark and fatal night.
You stayed with me for ten long years out here,
Then followed me to school and helped me fight.


So, great job! And I am incredibly happy to have finally found another Slytherin! On the forums, I was Sorted into Slytherin for the first time; normally I'm in Gryffindor, which I find ironic. So, I'm glad to know that I'm not the only Slytherin in the world who likes the Trio/Gryffindors. {BeccA}

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm normally sorted Hufflepuff, though. I support House Unity, but I also support my house winning the House Cup. :) I like a lot of different characters, not just the trio and the other Gryffindors. The trouble is, we see the Gryffindors the most, so we know the most about them. We also get biased opinions of other characters.

Reviewer: Flobberworm93
Date: 06/05/08 16:21
Chapter: A Love Poem

Tada! It looks even more fantastic when it's published! Seriously, though, great job on this.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your help and your review! I hope the other people who read it but didn't reviewed enjoyed it as much as you did. By the way, I read a great sonnet the other day. I think it's called "Weasley's Wizard Wheezes" and it's good!

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