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Name: HarryPotterLover96 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/10 21:16 · For: Chapter 2, Diagon Alley
PLEASE MAKE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!!! PLEASE!!!???!!! IT'S VERY VERY GOODDDDDD!!!!!! PLEASE?!!?!!!??!!! THANKS WHENEVER YOU CAN GET IT UP HERE.


Name: life_lemons (Signed) · Date: 06/20/08 21:56 · For: Chapter 2, Diagon Alley

The one cirtism I have is that it isn't always clear who is talking. I was able to figur everything out, but sometimes it took some effort.

Other than that it was really good. I wonder what is so special about the cat. Hmmm... Can't wait till the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks, I'll watch out for that. :) The cat isn't all that special, but pure grey kittens are actually very expensive, and considoring this is a magical cat (although it doesn't really have powers) it's just expensive. :p The cat isn't important to the story.


Name: harryandginny1165 (Signed) · Date: 06/20/08 2:31 · For: Chapter 2, Diagon Alley
hey i read ur first story ages ago, but this one has that modern day twist to it that makes it more enjoyable. But why did u change? i thought the other one was still good???

Author's Response: Thanks! :D Well, I was ashamed to look at the other one, my writing was so sub-standard, and also this is for a challenge on the beta boards. Only, I've got to get three more chapters up to get points. :O


Name: harry4lif (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 19:20 · For: The Offer
I loved it! I can't wait to read more! Update soon!

Author's Response: :O :D **Huggles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!** Thanks, duck!!


Name: Bexia (Signed) · Date: 05/20/08 19:14 · For: The Offer
It has great potential. A very interesting first chapter!!!

Bex

Author's Response: Thank you, my only and fantastic reviewer! :D


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