Reviewer: HarryPotterLover96
Date: 05/10/10 21:16
Chapter: Chapter 2, Diagon Alley

PLEASE MAKE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!!! PLEASE!!!???!!! IT'S VERY VERY GOODDDDDD!!!!!! PLEASE?!!?!!!??!!! THANKS WHENEVER YOU CAN GET IT UP HERE.

Reviewer: life_lemons
Date: 06/20/08 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 2, Diagon Alley

The one cirtism I have is that it isn't always clear who is talking. I was able to figur everything out, but sometimes it took some effort.

Other than that it was really good. I wonder what is so special about the cat. Hmmm... Can't wait till the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks, I'll watch out for that. :) The cat isn't all that special, but pure grey kittens are actually very expensive, and considoring this is a magical cat (although it doesn't really have powers) it's just expensive. :p The cat isn't important to the story.

Reviewer: harryandginny1165
Date: 06/20/08 2:31
Chapter: Chapter 2, Diagon Alley

hey i read ur first story ages ago, but this one has that modern day twist to it that makes it more enjoyable. But why did u change? i thought the other one was still good???

Author's Response: Thanks! :D Well, I was ashamed to look at the other one, my writing was so sub-standard, and also this is for a challenge on the beta boards. Only, I've got to get three more chapters up to get points. :O

Reviewer: harry4lif
Date: 06/04/08 19:20
Chapter: The Offer

I loved it! I can't wait to read more! Update soon!

Author's Response: :O :D **Huggles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!** Thanks, duck!!

Reviewer: Bexia
Date: 05/20/08 19:14
Chapter: The Offer

It has great potential. A very interesting first chapter!!!

Bex

Author's Response: Thank you, my only and fantastic reviewer! :D

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