If she is in remedial classes how did she get a scholorship?
well this answered my question about her surname. kind of. :)
The break up between Brian and Alexandra was well written. In the first chapter you had Brian's point of view and how he thought she was reckless and uncaring and his concern for his younger sister. Once she was in danger, he made up his mind that she went to far. Since at this point Alexandra really hasn't apologized (even though she meant no harm), Brian's break-up with her sort of represents the moral guidence that she needs as well as the fear a Muggle might have when encountering something different. Well written.
One wonders whether Mrs. Grimm's fake smile foreshadows problems at Charmbridge or whether Alexandra has the wrong first impression. I find it telling that Alexandra feels rejected because her mother wants her to go to this school.
One heck of a chapter. Very good details concerning her home life and her relationship with her parents. You have created an exasperated mom and a confused if slightly indifferent step dad.
hmmm somehow I don't think it's just a coincidence her name is Lilith Grimm. Both words mean bad things according to most Christians. Cool name though! :)
i knew the dean was a little off but this story is getting more and more interesting by the chapter. keep up the great writing i can't wait for the next one and the ending has to be amazing. I love this story!!!!!!!!!
ewww, a rat cupcake! I'm glad Alex didn't eat it. Now I'm impatient to know who Alex's father is, and what is up with Dean Grimm. Can't wait for what's coming next!
can't wait to find out what was in the woods and that Larry is a real jerk, I'm not sure i compeltly trust Mr. Journey. I think he's up to something or behind something, i don't know if it's good or bad but something.
ewwww i hope alex didn't just shoot herself in the foot or her friends foot i guess after what the dean said.
Oh no! Why Alex, why?
wow, i love this story! It's so original and fascinating. So does the dean have some sort of ulterior motive for changing her attitude so suddenly? She was so cold earlier in the year, and now all of a sudden she's almost warm. if Alexandra's not Abraham's daughter (and i still think she probably is) then who's her father? how is this new assistant groundskeeper going to fit into the story? I can't wait to read more! Keep writing!
Another great chapter! I don't know about Ms. Grimm-she seemed really odd. Was she using magic on Alex in the end? hmm
good one, i knew the dean wasn't behind it or is she reguardless. i thought this was a well written chapter your charaters really pop off the page, nicely 3 demenional. can't wait for the next one.
I've just spent the last three hours reading chapter after chapter of this GREAT story! I like how you've brought the magical world State-side and made such an elaborate, yet VERY entertaining story! I can't wait for the next chapter to post!!!
I simply adore this story! Ilove the speedy updates and Ive fallen in love with the characters...why on earth is life so cruel to Alex?!?!!?!
cant wait for the next installment, keep it up its a great story
ChloŽ =D x
Author's Response: If life were easy for her, her story wouldn't be as interesting. ;) Thank you for your review!
I can not believe how quickly you are getting this story updated! But I'm not complaining since I'm completely hooked! : )
So Alex was being lured to the pond again ... definitely some evil going on there. Too bad she was never able to talk to her mother. She definitely knows more about the wizarding world than she's let on. I was really impressed with how maturely Alex handled the bullying from the other kids and Brians betrayal.
Author's Response: Thank you! She probably doesn't think she handled it so well after she nearly unleashed a curse on them. Alexandra is maturing, but it's a difficult process.
WOW, who ever wants Alex gone is sure trying pretty hard, i bet it's her father coming out of hiding. can't wait for the next chapter.
Just realized you write Hogwarts Houses Divided! These two are my favorite ones right now...again thanks, but I should really go study for my final now...lol
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like both my stories. Hope you did well on your final!