Reviews For Hunting
Reviewer: michiko
Date: 06/26/08 22:40
Chapter: Prologue: The Doe

hehehe, I FOUND YOU!! oh, and I told the others don't worry...your secret isn't safe, rumiko.

anyways, I liked your story but you should write more of it because it's summer so I know you have gobs of free time.

I hope you understand who this is ( I don't see how you couldn't)


Author's Response: *expletive* Hi Emma... I'll find you on facebook, I promise. When are you going to school?? My sis (avoiding names) is home, you should drop by and say hi... Thanks for the review; I had other stories but I deleted them. Japanese final was so TIGHT. We just sat around eating sushi and pizza. And we finished Shall We Dansu. Porko Rosso was lame. Anyway, I should find you on facebook...this probably isn't the place for my ramblings.

Reviewer: Elmindreda
Date: 06/17/08 9:29
Chapter: What's To Come

I really like your descriptive style. The way you write makes the reader feel so in tune with Severus' thoughts and emotions - somehow, as I was reading, I could feel myself there, in that cold snowy morning.

"With the first rays of sunlight on the horizon came expectations, and pretences; false smiles and friends and confidences." - there is pure magic in this line, and so much feeling. There is something utterly heartbreaking about it.

I will be eagerly awaiting the continuation.


Author's Response: *blushes* Wow...I'm so flattered, because I'm a huge fan of yours! :D Thanks tons, El!rnP.S. Haha--I'm glad you liked that line...that paragraph was my single least favourite in the entire story! XD

Reviewer: Treacle_Heart
Date: 06/11/08 12:47
Chapter: Prologue: The Doe

Wow, I love your writing style! The imagery is great, in that last paragraph!
This is definitely one of my favorites!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!! I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: indigo_mouse
Date: 06/04/08 22:30
Chapter: What's To Come

Aha! So this is where you have been! In the midst of a cold forest. I like the way this ties into Deathly Hallows, you've taken the story and *twisted* ever so slightly.

The imagery in the last paragraph is quite lovely. I am impressed.

Author's Response: Haha! No, I haven't been neglecting you because I'm working on this. This is ancient. I'm in the midst of finals. rn*sad face* Thanks for the review dahling!

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 05/29/08 4:33
Chapter: Prologue: The Doe

Hello Rhi! I have no idea where this leads to, but I know it's going to be interesting. Also, I'd like to see how this ties in with the rest of the story, so I'm definitely going to keep tabs on this fic. :D


Author's Response: *blows kiss* Thanks dahling!

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 05/28/08 3:18
Chapter: Prologue: The Doe

Wow, this sounds very interesting. Can't tell much from the prologue except that you write very well, but the summary really drew me in. Waiting for the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I know it is ridiculously short...meh. Other chapters are all around 2000 words. :)

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