Reviewer: FireflyPrincess
Date: 05/17/12 21:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved it...Sirius was the character whose death I regretted most and this story was exactly as I'd wanted it to be. Pity about the lack of confrontation with the Dursleys, though I understand why you did it :)

Author's Response: It's been quite a while since I've been on this website; imagine my surprise when I see such a kind review waiting for me. I'm so very glad you loved the story. I completely agree with you too. The other deaths of the series, I was able to deal with. Sirius' death, on the other hand, hit me like a punch in the gut. Thank goodness fanfiction gives him an opportunity to still be in stories. A Sirius/Dursley interaction certainly would have been interesting... Thanks again.

Reviewer: Gnomie13035
Date: 07/07/08 18:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Luv it! Can't wait for the next Chapter!!! Keep up the good work! Also, Luv your work on ff.net!!

~Gnomie~

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you love my story enough to want to read more. However, this story is clearly a one-shot, and I have no plans for continuing it. I'm glad you like my stuff on other sites too. Thank you for the review. ;)

-Potterworm

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 06/16/08 13:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

Watch out for Americanisms, you had rather a lot there. Other than that, really good, really sweet. A happy ending before the ending. ;) I would have liked to have seen Sirius have a chat with the Dursley's though. ;) ~Evie

Author's Response: Ah, Americanisms, I try to avoid them the best I can, but normally I fail. Seeing as I am American, it's not the worst criticism I could get. Lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I thank you for the review. As far as a seen with Sirius and the Dursleys, i'm afraid I would have ruined the story including something like that. Whenever I directly include Sirius and the Durlseys I fear cliches. Thanks again. :)

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