Very good! Will you be updating soon? :) You did a good job :)

Oh I loee HermionexGeorge/Fred!! It's one of my favorite non-canon pairs! I can't wait to see where you take this story with both of them liking other people at the moment. Good luck and I cannot wait for chapter two!

Author's Response: As you can tell I also like Hermione/George! It's nice to hear from someone who feels the same way. Thanks for reviewing!

First, I want to say "Thank you!"

You characterization of Hermione is really good! It's better than a lot of things I've read on MNFF. I find people have a tendency to make Hermione smart in ways that aren't true to her character. So, I applaud your Hermione!

George's characterization is also very good: Still a little silly but also kind of serious.

The story idea itself is very intriguing and can't wait for the next chapter!

Smiles,
Luna

Author's Response: Thank you for your insights about the characters! It's always nice to hear what a story is doing right.rn I'm working on Chapter Two right now, hopefully it won't take as long to get accepted.