Reviews For The Promise
Reviewer: MayraXOXO
Date: 12/20/09 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Lovers

Ooohh, I LOVE it.

Reviewer: JS Weasley
Date: 07/07/09 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Lovers

i want to read more about this little scandalous affair. POST MORE PLEASE

Reviewer: siilly_bookworm_28
Date: 12/24/08 10:18
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Lovers

A very good first story! You make it seem easy! First story, and already a pro! Felicitations!

Reviewer: Boosh
Date: 10/30/08 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Lovers

i like it. soz i cant think of anythin else to say

Author's Response: Ahh thank you xxx

Reviewer: tashy
Date: 07/07/08 10:09
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Lovers

it has a rather cofunsing start and at some points i go a little lost and had to re read it a few times to understand it.how ever it is ur first story and it actually has a good plot.i love the fact that snape and hermione are not to gether but have had a relationship before.it makes it so very dramatic and i love that!congrats on your very first chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks alot, Im really glad you liked it made and could be bothered to read it enough times till it made sense, rnplease keep reading more is coming soon.rnx

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 07/04/08 8:09
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Lovers

Interesting way to approach the story - I'll be interested to see how it unfolds.

Author's Response: thanks you,I thought it might be fun hope you keep readingrnx

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 07/03/08 14:42
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Lovers

Very hard to understand but I think you'll get the hang of it when you add more chapters. Other than that it is a very good start.

Author's Response: sorry that you found it difficult to understand basicly, the italics are flashbacks of the pair remebering the times they've had together, hopefully you wil be interested enough to read the next chapter that is coming soon, thanks for your review rnx

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