Reviews For Brothers in Arms
Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 11/28/08 0:41
Chapter: Brothers in Arms

Nice job! Your good narration skills really drew me into the story. I can really imagine the confusion and anger felt by Sirius and the panic and sorrow felt be Regulus. Also leads in nicely to the issue with the locket and RAB. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker
Date: 07/27/08 20:51
Chapter: Brothers in Arms

I'm not sure what happened here, if Stubby was your partner, then why weren't your stories combined into one?  Reading through both of them I can see that they went in different directions but you were supposed to work together to make one story.

You did a good job here though and the story stands alone. You did a good job going through the prompts and you tied it up pretty well. Good job.

~Kristy (gauntlet guide/judge round 6)



Author's Response: What happened was it was a big mix up and she didn't get my answers to the prompt and I didn't get hers so we wrote two stories to the exact same prompts when she should have done prompt one, then I should have got her response and done prompt two ect. But that didn't happen and it all got mixed up.

Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 07/22/08 4:07
Chapter: Brothers in Arms

Aww!!!!!! Brotherly love!!!!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/21/08 14:57
Chapter: Brothers in Arms

This would be a brilliant fic to put on my gap fillers list for canon, onlything is that Sirius seemed very bitter towards his brother during his brief appearance in the books. I guess i could account for that with his time in Azkaban though. If so then i'd put this around the time Regulus was turning back to the light, I'm guessing he'll go after the locket horcrux round about this point. Sorry, this isn't much of a review is it?

OK, this was very well written, the emotions and reactions were very accurate for people in that position and I loved the ending, hope Regulus obliviates that death eater so no suspicion is put on himself.

Author's Response: Thankyou! They're both only very young, Sirius is only a year out of school, so Azkaban hasn't taken its toll on him yet, and I like to think that deep down (really, really deep down) they still had a little brotherly affection.

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