Reviewer: magicalmartha
Date: 01/30/12 0:40
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

write more, this is hilarious!

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 04/23/11 20:36
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

It was awesome!!!!! I loved it you neeeeed to do more chapters!!!!!

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 01/06/11 18:49
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

When was the last time you had updated this story? It's really funny, so I hope you add more soon!

Reviewer: the bushy haired know-it-all
Date: 04/23/10 16:25
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

love it! cant wait until i see what it says to malfoy...

Reviewer: the bushy haired know-it-all
Date: 04/23/10 16:25
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

love it! cant wait until i see what it says to malfoy...

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 07/26/09 11:29
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

i loved that! it was really funny! i think you should make more chapters with more people cuz that was hilarious!

Reviewer: summerlily42
Date: 06/28/09 12:05
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

loved it so far! great great great! just the last few paragraphs were kind of confusing... but i cant wait until another chpter is up!

Reviewer: harry4lif
Date: 04/17/09 11:07
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

Hey, BB!

So, you caught my interest with this, though I usually despise Humour. Dean, stealing it? I can picture that, if he really wanted Parvarti that bad. But then she had to go and be a spoiled git…

Is Ms Dun-Bar Lily? I think it is….but I wanted to ask you just to check and make sure…

I love what the Marauders say, I think it is so them to do that. But I’m surprised that Padfoot said Harry’s his godson, and that Prongs said that Harry’s his son. I mean, that would make it quite obvious who’s map it was…and if she didn’t know who the others would, it wouldn’t take much to find out…or does she not care who’s map it was originally? And that all she cares about is that Harry spends so much time looking it over?

Other than that, I really don’t have much to comment on…I love this fic, and I really wish that you would continue it! You’re starting to make me like humour, please continue it. *puppy eyes*

Oh, and in case you’re wondering, this was your easter egg.

~Alyssa

Reviewer: harrysgirl28
Date: 04/08/09 19:52
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

I loved it!

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 04/01/09 22:02
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

Ummmm.....this story was super awesome. Hope you continue it!

Reviewer: Didekoi
Date: 01/28/09 19:28
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

please write more XD

Author's Response: I definitely shall! It's just that I got a little (yeah, right) sidetracked by a lot of other things... But in the meanwhile, you could watch out for my other three-ish stories in the queue!

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 12/05/08 22:56
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

Hi BB! I remember reading an excerpt from this ages ago in the EoM thread (back when I frequented there...). At the time I was tickled to laughter and I didn't forget it... when I saw it was up I was so excited! It's just as good as I remember it--hilarious! I'd love to see more (I promise to lather compliments as thickly on subsequent chapters! ;) ). Highly enjoyable. :)
~Rhiannon

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked *what's there of* the story... :)
'd love to see more (I promise to lather compliments as thickly on subsequent chapters! ;)
You're going to regret saying that... Muahahaha!

Reviewer: Klone
Date: 12/03/08 21:38
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

Having Padfoot say that Harry was his godson and Prongs say that Harry was his son was a bit of a givaway. I think the point of the Marauders Map was to insult whoever trying to read it without giving away who they were, like when Snape tried to find out who the map belonged to.

Author's Response: But that's all left to the reader, isn't it? Rowling never explicitly states hwo the Map works, so I've taken it in such a way that the Map shares the knowledge known by all the Marauders at all times. Get it?

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 11/04/08 11:09
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

Love it! Their comments are so funny! Please update soon, its been like forever!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I feel so guilty for not updating... I promise, I'll update soon- I have two more fics in the queue right now and another one waiting to get back from the Beta, so as soon as I get those cleared up, I'll work on this story again. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: chocolattewizard
Date: 10/16/08 8:18
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

Brilliant! Love it! It's very creative, I never really thought much about Dean having a thing for Parvati. Is this before or after Sirius dies? Please update soon!

Author's Response: I shock you with every word, don't I? I'm like the grand-father of electricity! Muahahahaha! I myself am not very sure when this is supposed to be set- it could be anytime in the books...

Reviewer: Fred and Georgie
Date: 10/09/08 16:39
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

I loved it! LOL! More, more please!

Author's Response: Glad you loved it! Yes, more is coming soon!

Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 09/01/08 3:20
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

This chapter is SO FUNNY!!!!!! I'm sure everyone can tell that Ms.Dun-Bar is Lily Evans, but I still LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Huggles From HermyStar

Author's Response: Did you know that lilies are one of the main food for the insect called the dun-bar? /random info Glad you LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111!!!!11123423423$#@$$

Reviewer: Child_of_Darkness
Date: 08/17/08 18:03
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

finish writing it!!! its great

Author's Response: I-T. There. I finished writing "it".

MUAHAHAHAHA!

I PWN, don't I? Thanks for the compliment anyway!

Reviewer: linnealovegood
Date: 08/16/08 21:53
Chapter: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

keep going! its sounds good.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! What's your username supposed to mean? It sounds interesting!

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