Reviews For Crossed Wires
Reviewer: kandi_girl13
Date: 04/25/09 16:51
Chapter: Crossed Wires

oh.my.god.
no!

Reviewer: Sohl
Date: 02/17/09 15:38
Chapter: Crossed Wires

This was simply an amazing read.
First of all, I was impressed by how you were abel to include a love letter without it being incredibly sappy and badly written. And when Remus gave Sirius the letter and left, I had butterflies in my stomach, understanding completely the feeling Remus was having at the moment. When Sirius comes to Remus afterwards and seems so happy, I thought it was going to be a happy ending, with no complications, but I didn't mind, because the story had been so well written that I would have loved it anyway.
However, the plot twist you add is so unexpected and great, it leaves me feeling sad for poor Remus, and happy for what a great fan fiction I had the pleasure of reading. I absolutely loved this. :)

Author's Response: I'm not sure it's possible for me to write a romance with no complications. I don't think I have the fluffy gene. I'm flattered you enjoyed the story so much. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 02/08/09 9:38
Chapter: Crossed Wires

Poor Remus! Poor Sirius! I can't believe it had to end like that...

Very well written and thought out.

Author's Response: Thank you. I did consider ending it differently, but I kind of wanted to keep it somewhat in line with canon.

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