Reviews For Nott On Your Life
Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 09/06/09 0:20
Chapter: Chapter 2: And More And More Violent....

I want more. Though they appear to be the least popular of your stories, I love your Nott stories. They're awesome.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love writing Theo stories for some reason, and it does make me sad that other people don't seem to like them as much. I have the beginnings of one (tentatively called "Nott This Time") that includes time travel and is the immediate sequel to this one... it's lying in wait for the next time I'm in a gauntlety mood.

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 09/06/09 0:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: As If Things Weren't Weird Enough Already

I haven't reviewed this yet? And it has only NINE reviews? (Well, ten, now, I suppose..)
This shows your more grotesque side...is a future Potter's Pentagon chapter to be like this? Or worse?

Also:
“I’d like your name, if that’s okay with you,” adds Smugg, leaning forward over the counter and directly into a platter of spiny-looking fish.

I don't think this man is a licensed sashimi dealer. You need to watch that. Especially in the case of fugu.

Author's Response: Hmmm, a future Potter's Pentagon chapter is pretty gory... but I don't think ANYTHING will be this gory. It wasn't my fault, though-- this was for the gauntlet, and I had to respond to a series of prompts... all of which were bloody and disgusting.

Hahaaaa, fuguuuu... I read the thing about the licensed sashimi dealer out loud to my sister. But she didn't get it.

Reviewer: Nova
Date: 01/10/09 19:27
Chapter: Chapter 2: And More And More Violent....

*GASP!* Whyyy was I not informed of this update!?

Probably because I am stupid and haven't been bothered to check.

I'm certainly on a roll today. 2 reviews already, and I haven't even been awake for 2 hours.

*superhero music* REVIEW TIIME!

Oh wow, this is REALLY chock-full of action.
I LOVE EET!


Woooah. This is one craaazy story!
Who would've thought that Argus Filch was behind it all. Well actually Mr. Deathly was...

CONTINUING ON! *trumpet noises*.

YES! GO ABERFORTH! He's so cool with his goats and all. If he was my granddaddy, I would use it as my comeback. If someone said I was ugly, I'd be all like... 'YEAH!? WELL MY GRANDDAD FARMS GOATS!'

Sorry. I'm not in my right mind today.
And I haven't even eaten any tictacs!
I haven't eaten ANYTHING for that matter...

And I'm glad that my stupid reviews make you smile. Usually when I go on crazy rants like I do in reviews, people tend to think that I'm inconceivably odd.

AND HALF THE TIME MY REVIEWS AREN'T EVEN ABOUT THE STORY I'M REVIEWING FOR!
I MEAN. WHAT THE HELL IS WITH THAT?!

I'm really sorry.

But I love the story.

I think it's fantastickalickious.

Goodbye, now!

Author's Response: Ah, you're just bent on making me happy today. And yes, this CERTAINLY IS one crazy story! But... you should so know by now that I love making Argus Filch my evil mastermind... after all he DID buy all of Voldemort's evil powers off of Bay!

I love, love, love Aberforth. It would be awesome if he was my granddad. HEY, AND THEN WE COULD BE COUSINS!

Reviewer: CAPS_LOCK_ADDICTE
Date: 01/06/09 4:10
Chapter: Chapter 2: And More And More Violent....

Great story... a bit to much blood and gore to my taste but who cares? You can make anything sound good XD
Any way could you please put November in the story? I miss her

Author's Response: Don't worry, November will be in the next one! And yes, I REALLY don't like blood and gore, but I was following a series of prompts. Prompts like... a bloody wall and staircase. Euuurgh!

Reviewer: WhatsInAName
Date: 12/10/08 20:54
Chapter: Chapter 2: And More And More Violent....

Hafta say, these Nott puns are growing on me. What's next, 'Nott a Chance'? How about 'Nott Good'? Or maybe, 'He Loves Me, He Loves Me Nott'?

This was certainly unique. You have a way with words, Schmergo. I honestly can't think of many other authors who can use 'blood' twenty times (I counted... and that's this chapter only. Of course, that includes two or three references to blood-replenishing potion, but *still*.) and still keep a tongue-in-cheek tone. Bravissima!

Oh, speaking of opera-related things, we ran out of time on filming day, thanks to 1a) my friend's little brother coming down with a stomach bug, 1b) my friend's godsister's mother deciding that it was too risky to let her come (when the kid wasn't contagious at all), and 2) the unanticipated length of time devoted to filming. So, we didn't get to record anything of yours parody-wise. However, I'm going to see what I can do with my stuff, and maybe I can work something out. Do you know of any good karaoke tracks on iTunes for PotO or any other musicals? Because, if there are any, I'll probably use them for parody recording.

...Where was I? Got sidetracked. That happens a lot. Anywho, yeah, blood. Bit more than I expected, but like I said, you handled it quite well. And I nearly pulled a muscle at the 'boyfriend' bit. Immature reaction? Quite possibly. What can I say? Awkwardness is awesome... *because*. It's sort of along the lines of stage kisses in middle school/high school productions. There's absolutely no logical reason for them to be awkward, they just are... *because*. Reminds me of 'Godspell'... you wouldn't believe the giggle-issues people had with Judas kissing Jesus' (my) hand. I don't want to know what would have happened if we had done it the acurrate way...

Since I'm now into ramble mode, I'd better bring this to a close. So long!

~Sam

Reviewer: tilli
Date: 12/09/08 10:37
Chapter: Chapter 2: And More And More Violent....

weird.. but awesome..

Author's Response: Whyyy thank you!

Reviewer: Firkant
Date: 11/28/08 15:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: As If Things Weren't Weird Enough Already

Oh god. I love you Theo, He is great :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm rather fond of the little blighter myself.

Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 11/27/08 12:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: As If Things Weren't Weird Enough Already

That certainly is a little different for you. I didn't believe you when you said it would be more intense than your other stories.

There are a few typoes (typos?) like forgotten words or letters. Not so much that it takes away from the story, but enough to notice.

Smiles,
Luna

Author's Response: I FEEL LIKE A FILTHY ANIMAL! I DON'T LIKE WRITING BLOODY VIOLENCE! UGHHHH! These gauntlets are too much for me! Yeah, there are so many typos... I don't know how they all got in there! I use spell check!

Reviewer: InvisibleAparecium
Date: 11/26/08 21:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: As If Things Weren't Weird Enough Already

Oh wow, nice way to end a chapter. I love mysterious, dark, dead, bleeding, unkown figures. You probably won't tell me, but I'll ask anyways: So, who killed Aberforth? Who is the bleeding, unknown figure? Are they the same person?

I have many more questions... You are really good at this whole "suspense" thing.

I'm SO excited to this fic. I love the other two Nott fics you did, and now we get a one with MORE than one chapter! SQUEE!

Very random thought: The name "Eglantine" reminds me of "Euglena," which is a small, green, plantlike protist. PLANTLIKE. Either that, or "Eggplant."

Hugs,
Halle

Author's Response: You will find up very soon... because there are only two chapters! I'm glad you like the suspense; it's a lot of fun for me! ANd whenever I type the word 'mugglenet' on Microsoft Word, my computer changes it to 'euglena!'

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 11/26/08 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 1: As If Things Weren't Weird Enough Already

Is this what I think it is? YES, IT'S ANOTHER THEO NOTT STORY!

Zomg, I love this! It's quite different from your other stories, having murder and mild gore and all that, but I still like it. Eglantine's a great character... I can't really see her with George, but that's all right.

This is DH disregarded, right? Or else the whole Snape thing doens't make much sense, haha.

Typo time! *ignores groans* that’s what I don’t understandabout Potter. Understand and about should be two different words.

Great fic so far, overall... but an awful, dreadful cliffie at the end. However, I had to drop out of the Gauntlet to get more time, so it was nice to read a good one, even if I couldn't write one myself. Can't wait for the next chapter!
~PnP
PS- I'm anxious to see who killed Aberforth... and who the person in the meat locker is.

Author's Response: Oh yay, I'm glad that other people besides me like Theo Nott! Yeah, I don't like writing the really gory stuff, but the gauntlet prompts just get more and more scary with each gauntlet I do! By the way, if this wasn't clear-- this story is set BEFORE DH! It's before the whole final battle thing. I guess I should have made that clear. It was in the first Theo gauntlet story, but I don't know why I'd expect anyone but me to remember this!

Reviewer: Nova
Date: 11/25/08 23:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: As If Things Weren't Weird Enough Already

First Post! :D

Argh. Cliffies! Of course we all want to know... Who's in the meat locker?

Another great story, Schmergo.
A couple of small errors, like forgetting letters in words and end brackets... but they don't matter :)

Update soon!

Author's Response: Oh dear, I am just full of typos! It's great to get my first revieeeew, though!

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