Reviews For Muggle Island
Reviewer: Amor vincit omnia
Date: 07/31/09 12:26
Chapter: Mourning for Cake and Aprons

Love it! I especially like stories featuring Petunia as a character. Usually Vernon is the dominant one, but I really enjoy nuggets into Petunia's world,now that we know she has a lot more than meets the eye. And "ice cream! i want ice cream!" part is just too amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you for all your positive comments :) If you like Petunia/her story, you might also like the poem Into the Light (by me). And I know there is a story on this site that follows Petunia through the war- I just can't remember the name of it (it's not by me).... you could look in the D/A fics or General for it? Thanks again!

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 07/23/09 20:41
Chapter: Mourning for Cake and Aprons


I was going to copy and paste my favorite moments in this story, but there were too many. Here's one i found particularly funny:
"We gave you swimming lessons, remember? Make an ice-cream scooper with your hands!” she shouted from the shoreline.

“Ice cream! I want ice cream!” wailed Dudley, flailing about in the water.

You captured the personalities of the Dursleys fabulously. Dudley's spoiled-ness and stupidity comes out really well, and so does Vernon's and Petunia's personalities. Petunia really likes that apron, doesn't she?

Awesome Story!

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much! The only thing I love better than a review is knowing what were peoples favorite lines :) It was enjoyable to write, I had so many ideas as to what they could say... Thank you for all the reviews :)

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 07/23/09 20:34
Chapter: Chocolate Cake

this story is a really good idea! the Dursleys stuck on an island is pretty funny, especially Vernon trying to use smoke signals!

Author's Response: Thank you :) And your penname is awesome!

Reviewer: 4_leaf_clover
Date: 06/25/09 15:18
Chapter: Mourning for Cake and Aprons

That was a hilarious story! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 04/16/09 2:56
Chapter: Mourning for Cake and Aprons

i thought the part where vernon was asking petunia n dudley to keep quite was funny:P.... they kept arguing abt wat is more important... i really pity Bill ...he had to stand vernon n dudley's weight...haha.... love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u should really do humour fics:D.... well i think now im going to go n read "time gives us a push"....i always love james/lily pairing!:D...

Author's Response: Yea; I love knowing which parts people liked best. Poor Bill indeed! He was so excited to help- and they attacked him... lol. Thank you for all the awesome reviews :)

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 04/16/09 2:45
Chapter: Chocolate Cake

haha ur right...i love this too... its funny... i love dudley nick name to.... Dummpy whummpy...:p

Author's Response: Thank you for reading three of my stories! I'm glad you liked it :) Every time I wrote down one of his nick-names I cracked up...

Reviewer: Harry_Potter4life
Date: 01/29/09 20:57
Chapter: Chocolate Cake

hilarious! I LOVE how stupid Dudley is!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments :) Oh, Dudley... what can we do with him?

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/22/09 22:01
Chapter: Mourning for Cake and Aprons

I think utter chaos is saying that nicely! LOL Fun chapter thats for sure

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments! Yes, I suppose utter chaos is putting it nicely... scared for life might be better :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/22/09 21:58
Chapter: Chocolate Cake

Hahaha, the Dursleys never cease to amaze me, These people are unbelievable!! Great chapter :-)

Author's Response: I love writing about the Dursleys- there are so many funny things one can do with them! Thank you for the read and review :)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/22/09 19:03
Chapter: Mourning for Cake and Aprons

With any luck he left the Dursley's on the island?
Cute story

Author's Response: Haha, Harry and you both wish that :) Sadly, Bill did his job correctly and the Dursleys are back home. I'm glad you like the story- thank you for both reviews!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/22/09 18:57
Chapter: Chocolate Cake

Gee, it's just too bad they're stuck. Not!

Author's Response: My thoughts exactly :)

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 12/16/08 17:10
Chapter: Chocolate Cake

This is a quietly amusing story. I can't wait to read the rest of it!

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments! I'm glad you find it amusing :)

Reviewer: Lyra Lestrange
Date: 12/06/08 21:57
Chapter: Chocolate Cake

I can see this turning into a really funny story. I love it when an author takes an aspect of canon that is unexplained and creates a story around it! This is a good idea, and Uncle Vernon is very in-character!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love missing moments as well, and when you add in Dudley... so much fun :) Thank you again for your comments, and the second chapter should be up soon-ish!

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