Write more.... I really do enjoy... But say he got his hair cut... I keep imaginig him with an ugly mullet...
i liked it!
The best of the best. Can't wait to hear what happens next!
Omg I LOVE your story I really hope you can update soon. Great job :)
You know....I think I have read this fic before...after all there're very few Dramione's I havn't read. Anyways, I loved the start with the mirror! I always find Narcissa/Draco dialog a bit of hard to read to be honest, just because so many people portray their relationship so differently - not having much canon to base it on. What I thin you did really well was show how much Narcissa loves her son, something we do know from canon :-). I think this is great for a first Dramione, but your writing has matured a lot from this fic to "Oblivion." Just one super tiny little thing ->
"unfortunately succeeding to make me miserable." I would have changed to unfortunately succeeded in making me miserable. haha. Love you, love the fic, xoxoxoxox
Author's Response: Aww, thank you, Elene, darling! Yes, I agree - the Narcissa/Draco family relationship is a difficult one to get right, and I'm glad you think I did it well! Oh, God, yeah, I definitely think my writing's improved since starting this - though most of these chapters aren't Beta-ed LOL. Thanks for the review, my dear, and the advice :) xxx
You havn't updated in over 5 months! Your going to right?
Author's Response: Don't worry, I will update, I promise! Things are slightly... hectic at the moment, but when things have settled down again and I plan things out, I will update. Thanks for the review :)
love it. Absolutly brilient. :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much for the compliment and the review! :)
I like your style [:
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I do plan on doing it :) xxx
Perfect dialogue for Hermione, very realistic. Enjoyable chapter, cannot wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I love things being realistic - especially dialogue. For some reason, I'm never that confident about how my dialogue for characters turns out. So that means a lot :)
Draco dear, why on earth wouldn't the Head Girl be Granger? The muggles enjoy watching you confronting Hermione and falling in love eventually. Nice job, Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x (what a long penname!) ! I'm really enjoying this fiction, and I can't wait for September the first to come!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks a lot SquibPower, I hope you continue to enjoy it ( and review ;] )
I loved it! I wish there was a picture of this Draco you've described. Draco is one of my favorite characters!!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I know - I love Draco too :) Hmmm, maybe I should commission some-one to draw one for me...
Cookies... I wnt more... This is interesting.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'll try to update ASAP - I've abandoned this for far too long.
hey, i love this story alot i just stumbled across it today and got to read all seven chapters at once, i do hope you update soon as i feel your story is very beleivable with the way that you write which is rather refreshing. And your characters are not ooc which happens to be the bane of my fanfiction existence (lol)i just hate it when writers have no regard to Jkr and the manner with which she molded her characters but your story is very accuraate at characterization and Draco is delightfully easy to connect with and this makes your story so much more appealing too i'm really looking forward to what you're going to write next and hope it's not too long a wait xx
Author's Response: Aww, wow, thanks for all your lovely comments! It's nice to know the story isn't too cliche and the characters are all IC - it's something I really work on :) Hopefully it won't be too long until I update again; the Muse abandoned me (again) but I'm just going to sit down and work. Keep checking in to see how it's going! xxx
Gosh, I just love Dramione Fan Fics. I've read your story over and, over. I just can't stop! I have to say that of all of the Hermione/Draco stories i've read, this is one of my absolute favorites. In this great chapter that you've written here, everything between Hermione and Draco is so natural and in character that I can seriously imagine picking up a Harry Potter book right now and find all of this inside. Well done!
Author's Response: Oh WOW! Thanks so so so much for the great review! Seriously, I'm going to have to start writing again after that :) Thanks a bunch! xxx
yeah it was pretty good. i'm an avid Dramione fan so yeah its coming on nicely.
must dash to read the rest of the chapters!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! :]
no matter how much you say this chapter was bad, i'm gonna tell you now, it was great.
Author's Response: Aww, wow, thanks! It's funny - this is the shortest chapter and such a fluffy one, yet it's nearly the most popular! Hmm... Go figure.
I will leave this: I do like it and look forward to reading updates.
Author's Response: Aww thanks; your support is really appreciated! Now that I'm on my summer holidays, I'll try doubly hard to keep updating :D
Well, I think he asked a very good question. Do they think he can be like Harry? Who knows what he thinks of that, but if he can, he can get over this. He can get past it, like Harry got past things where most of the school was against him.
Some of the Slytherins are thugs, but it is not possible that all of them are. There have to be some very ambitious people who are not violent, and not controlling - just too busy making a success of themselves to care what Draco does. ..
Author's Response: Hi there; thanks for taking the time to review! Of course not all of them are violent - there are Slytherins like Andromeda who have qualities that the house values, but not the violence or hate. Unfortunately, Draco happened to run into some very foul ones! But who knows - over time, perhaps his house shall accept these changes...
I like that Draco is taking a stand on something. It does seem to be better than brooding. Not that he doesn't have some real reasons to be brooding - just that it hardly ever helps much.
Author's Response: That's true, and that period in Draco's life is over! He's had his time to feel sorry for himself, but now he's going back to his 'hot-shot' ways :)