Reviewer: adithyabigal
Date: 07/12/10 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 4: Howlers and Classes

it was really good
cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be up soon, promise!--Nadia ^_^

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/06/10 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

i like it so far pretty good

Author's Response: thanks! I'll try to post the next chapters soon. I just returned from hiatus, and I need to set my priorities straight a bit, and then I'll be back to updating the fic! I'm really sorry I've been gone for so long, but I had my O level exams!--Nadia

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/02/09 22:50
Chapter: Chapter 3: Surprises and More Surprises

Nice chapter. Using my imagination to think of how and why this is going to affect Albus. This is sounding very interesting. Definitely worth waiting for.

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for reading! And yes, the plot is developing slowly. There are gonna be pretty interesting stuff up soon, after a couple of chapters. But the interesting stuff will come soon, so don't stop reading! Hope you come for the next chapter!--Nadia

Reviewer: weasleywannabe47
Date: 07/01/09 21:25
Chapter: Chapter 3: Surprises and More Surprises

every five years
-Every four.


I'm very ready for the tournament to start, because it's a tad uneventful thus far.

It's still quite enjoyable, just not action-y.

7.33/10

Author's Response: Heya Wes! The Tournament is gonna start soon...just not within the next couple of chapter. Of course, there are gonna be classes, the choosing of the champions, then the big shock--oops, I'm telling everything, aren't I? Hehe... and just 7.33?? Aww.....*sniffs*. lol. See ya! Miss you on the forums, man, where are you?? ---Nadia

Reviewer: webkinz96
Date: 06/09/09 18:37
Chapter: Chapter 2: Songs and Sortings

Nice, Are srourpius and albus going to be friends?
really good story.
I can't make sorting aht songs up so i make them late so I don't have to write them lol

Author's Response: Well, you will just have to find out! *wink* If I tell, it wont be a surprise, will it? haha, lol. You can go to the forums and request others to make them for you! --Nadia

Reviewer: webkinz96
Date: 06/06/09 22:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

I love the story!
Did you come up with the sorting hat song your self?

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, man! I really appreciate it! And yes I made up the song by myself, with a help in one line by my friend!---Nadia

Reviewer: Dark_Angel123
Date: 03/30/09 12:17
Chapter: Chapter 2: Songs and Sortings

Ah, I've read this so many times, that I really have nothing to say lol.

So yeah, great chapter here, Nadia. Keep it up pal!

Hurry up and finish it man! I'm tired of reading the same chapters over and over again! :D

Author's Response: THANKS A LOT, RISH!!! And yeah, I'll send you the next chap soon, I'm almost done! Wait a while!--Nadia

Reviewer: weasleywannabe47
Date: 03/28/09 20:36
Chapter: Chapter 2: Songs and Sortings

~~~Nitpicks:

“Ah, Hagrid,” he said pleasantly. His voice was quite deep and strong. “The new students. Thanks a lot. You can go up to the feast if you wish. I’ll take it from here.”
-Neville is all business up until students, then he slips to casual. This is awkward

~~~review:

Nice chapter, good job on Al's shock after Scorpius's sorting!

6.9/10


~~~Spam:

I miss you guys on the forums!

Bye,
Wes

Author's Response: WES!!! Thanks for reviewing!!! Thanks a lot for the nitpick! Glad you liked the sorting, there's more fun to come! LOL. I miss you guys too........ I can't come on the forums nowadays, 'net time is limited for me. Stupid exams...*grumbles*. LOLLLLL! C YA!!!!---Nadia

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 03/28/09 19:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: Songs and Sortings

Not bad

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it!----Nadia

Reviewer: rayasunshine
Date: 12/24/08 11:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

Heya!
First chapter looks great, and I can't wait to see the others up there!

Author's Response: Thanks! I submitted chap 2, lets see what the mods say! The next ones will be up soon, hopefully.---Nadia

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman
Date: 12/18/08 12:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

Excellent start. Interesting. I hope you will complete this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I hope to complete the story too... first eleven chapters are done so far! Thanks!------------Nadia

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Potter
Date: 12/18/08 12:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

Nice story you've got there, bon! I like the plot and I like Andrew! I like Neville's role, too! Update soon, hon!

Author's Response: Sure, Pooja! I'll try to update soon, let my fic come back from my beta... I have finished writing upto chapter 11...so I'll try to post it all quickly!-----Nadia.

Reviewer: Dark_Angel123
Date: 12/12/08 3:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

Yeah, you finally submitted your fic! Good job and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yep, I did! When're you submitting yours? Do it quick! can't wait to read it! Thanks, and come back...oh, yeah, of course you will...bye!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/11/08 20:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

So far, so good. Is Andrew going to Hogwart's because his family is presently living in England?

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! Andrew's parents are originally British, and so is Andrew. That is why he goes to Hogwarts. Hope you come back for more!

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