Wow! That is a completely awesome idea for a fic. Pleeeeeeease write more chapters!
I think it's great, but the name Haven! It really is unique.
Author's Response: haha thanks....unique like, a bad choice? I like all forms of criticism, so don't be shy haha! :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Not bad at all.
Author's Response: thaanks!
Interesting...I'll admit, the name Haven is sort of odd (no offense meant if that's your/someone you know's name), but the idea is good.
Author's Response: Thanks. Well I've always liked the name Haven, i read it in a book awhile ago, and it does mean "safe place" and it fits. It is an odd name though, i'll give you that! Keep reading!
aww, how sweet
Author's Response: Thanks! The next few chapters will be Haven when she's a teenager, so keep reading please! :-D