very good. great characterization
Great story, fills in a gap nicely.
Good to see it from Sirius' point of view.
*tear* interesting story! nice job!
that was amazing... i loved it! glad to see you're still writing. i love your writing style and you capture the characters perfectly. great job!
i love sirius and felt so bad for him. remus too at the end. once again, amazing!
I love it... it nearly made me to cry...i really pity sirius... i guess, j.k.rowling was right by taking sirius's life so that he could join james and know that he didnt blame sirius for what had happened... Im sure only then sirius would be peaceful... great story though... love it!!!