Reviews For Wandless
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/26/13 20:14
Chapter: Epilogue - One Last Tale

I loved this story! I only found it two days ago and found it impossible to stop reading so I have literally read it from start to finish!! Brilliantly told!! I think my mouth hit the floor and then I giggled when I realized you translated Cybele's name to be Astoria Greengrass!!! I loved the interaction between her and Severus, her and Draco, and the twins, Lee, Neville, Caroline! It was fantastic!!! Well done!!

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing! Thanks for the awesome review :)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/25/13 16:38
Chapter: Chapter 13 Last Chance

This is brilliant!!!

Reviewer: dmbw7052
Date: 08/20/13 11:21
Chapter: Epilogue - One Last Tale

I want to tell you how much I enjoyed this story and to thank you for all the effort you put into it. I hope you continue to write future stories.

Author's Response: Great to hear that you enjoyed it! Thanks for taking the time to tell me :)

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 08/13/13 6:08
Chapter: Chapter 40 - Draco Malfoy

Happy chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 08/05/13 6:21
Chapter: Chapter 39 - The End

I came across this story yesterday and could not stop reading. A memorable effort and a great AU character. Thanks for the entertainment.

Author's Response: Thank you for the praise - I'm glad you likes it :) I submitted the last chapter today!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 04/01/13 17:06
Chapter: Chapter 27 The Tiniest Scrolls of Parchment

A little surprised that Draco tried to apologize by note. I was expecting something more sinister.

Reviewer: American_Witch
Date: 03/30/13 22:08
Chapter: Chapter 36 - Days After the Battle

Great story. I recently found this story and have loved reading every moment of it. I'm very excited to read the final installment. I will be said to see it end. You have done a great job inserting a new character into the world of JKR. Its always interesting to read other points of view during the Trio's time at Hogwarts. Again, very interested in how the story ends.

Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review! Hope you'll like the story till the end! :)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 10:59
Chapter: Chapter 26 What Happened at the Yule Ball

ominous ending.

Author's Response: Hehe... Will Draco say the S word? ;)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 10:46
Chapter: Chapter 25 The Unexpected Dance Partner.

The Au is not too much of a stretch.

Author's Response: I'm happy it isn't. They will dance together again in a later chapter :)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 10:35
Chapter: Chapter 24 The Tormented Tutor

loved Neville!

Author's Response: Thanks! There will be more of him :)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 10:28
Chapter: Chapter 23 Sleeping Beauty

Kinda amusing, seeing Draco embarassed.

Author's Response: It's challenging, to embarrass Draco while not going too OC. He would typically goes angry and aggressive, I reckon...

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 10:20
Chapter: Chapter 22 Sunday With Friends

spelling alert-- the word is not "picked", but "piqued" both words do sound similar.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 9:53
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Nightmare Before Christmas

Your portrayal of Malfoy is good. definitely torn between two world and too cowardly to make the right decision.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 9:45
Chapter: Chapter 18 An Imperfect Trap

Dumbledore's conversation with Cybele makes alot more sense now that we heard the after conversation with Snape.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 9:36
Chapter: Chapter 17 Last Stroll

Tis very dangerous if making a choice will result in death.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/29/13 9:27
Chapter: Chapter 16 A Night in the Kitchens

Was hoping to actually hear/read the tale of the Magi. (puts on sad pouty face)

Author's Response: There will be an other tale in the epilogue ;)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/28/13 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 14 A Bit of Muggle History

Amusing chapter. finding info in the muggle world.

Author's Response: After all, most of the Wizarding World looks suspiciously like Muggle tales and legends ;)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/28/13 18:18
Chapter: Chapter 13 Last Chance

Just wanted to say that sometimes Fred reminds me of James (Harry's father) in that he really hates nasty behavior. It may seem wierd since both James and Draco are bullys, but one of the characters said that James really hated the dark arts. It seems like that spirit of James is in your Fred.

Author's Response: I always perceived Fred and George as profoundly tolerant and loyal. They are pranksters and rule-breakers but throughout the all HP adventure, they are also brave, involved and standing up for what they believe in.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/28/13 18:04
Chapter: Chapter 12 Detention With Snape

Good chapter. You did Snape's POV quite well.

Author's Response: Thanks, I love doing Snape's POV!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/28/13 17:55
Chapter: Chapter 11 What Eslis Knew

Wow, it's been a long time since I first read this story. Most of the time, I dont get updates, but last week one slipped into my email. Back to the chapter.

I thought it was odd that Cybele felt terribly guilty. I don't recollect Ben saying or doing anything. Should she feel more guilty than Ben? And why should others judge her more harshly?

Also Caroline says she saw Cybele disappear, I'm thinking Cybele apparated to the library; so I go back to tthe last chapter and see no such apparition taking place. Then I realize it was just a figure of speech.

The Magian thing has interesting consequences. Maybe it explains why she felt so upset.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I should probably say "run away" instead of disappear, you're right! Cybele's panic attack is explained by later chapters ;)

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