This is completed? Don't leave us hanging! Make another chapter, plz?
I love it!
-GinervaPotter002
Really good story. I liked all the twists. I particularly like your characterization of REgulus, it seems dead on. Congrats on the story very good
Author's Response: Thank you very much the review. I love Regulus as a character and I'm really glad to hear that I got him dead on. Thank you!
I really thought Lily and Regulus was gonna get hit with the arrow and there would be this huge fight with James and stuff. You should make a continues with Lily and Regulus being in love at Hogarts.
Author's Response: I keep thinking about doing a Lily and Regulus story, but there are so many stories I have going right now that for now it is on the back burner until I can develop a good plot line for them!
Hahaha Thats a fantastic one shot!!! I think that you should write another Lily/Regulus fan fic!!! Great job :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. When I have some time, I may just write a Regulus/Lily fic because I really like the pair.
This is really funny and I would have never thought of Lilly/Regulus.
~Lilly
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I really appreciate it.
I would love to read a Lily/Regulus fic. The story here was great.
Just to reviwe again, I think you should continue on with this in some way because it's great.
Author's Response: I never thought of continuing it, but I do really love the pairing of Lily and Regulus. I may just try and get some more written for this! Thanks again for the review.
Good story, I liked the whole thing. I liked how you paired Regulus with Lily.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
I really like this story alot and it is vary good.
Author's Response: I appreciate the review!
CUTE!!!
Author's Response: thanks!
this is amazing! i never considered Lily and Regulus before but you mangaed to pull it off! lol, love the petunia/lucius reltionship!
Author's Response: thank you very much for the review. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked the two pairs. I have a thing for Regulus and that era lately. Thanks again!
Awww that was cute.... but you should have made it longer...
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I've considered making a longer story out of one of the pairs in that story (Lily/Regulus). I may just write a story, though the pair would never be anything more than friends.
The Author,
So, this is pretty much an awesome story. It had a good balance, and I like how it didn't make leaps and bounds just to make it interesting. It takes a lot of talent to write a one-shot and make it as lovely as a big twenty chapter saga. Keep up the good work, I'm very proud of you!
-The Reader
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you very much for the compliments. I'm really glad you liked it. I had a hard time choosing which pair (Lily/Regulus or Petunia/Lucius) I wanted to write for this challenge, so I'm really glad it came off well for writing them both in. Thanks!
fabbydabbydocious lol really really really good xxxxx =)
Author's Response: thank you very much for the review. I really really appreciate it!
that was realli greati enjoyd it alot
Author's Response: Thanks!
Hi there,
This is an interesting and fun story for the Valentine's challenge. I really like the pairing of Lily and Regulus - that's novel. Lucius and Petunia made me laugh - especially when she calls him pookie. (LOL)
I do have some nit picks. First, Molly Prewett was Molly Weasley - she had Bill in 1970 and Lily's second year begins September 1972 (this is me being a canon nut!). Secondly, Alice wouldn't have been Alice Longbottom because that's her married name. Thirdly, Bellatrix wasn't at school the same time as Lily - she was ten years older. Sorry these are all very minor canon things and they don't, by any means, ruin what is essentially a funny story.
Regulus fixed his eyes on Lily, those unforgettable grays, and a faint blush tinged his cheeks. I love this line so much. Regulus comes across as such a well rounded character and Lily seems very interested in him.
My favourite bits are the dialogue between Petunai and Lucius. So OOC, but just how they'd be like if hit by arrows.
Carole xxx
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much for my first review. I shall go back and fix some of the canon mistakes (I can't believe I named Alice with her married name...). I really appreciate the feedback and will fix what I can (though I don't know if I can work Bellatrix out of the story).
