I liked this story, a lot. But I still think that Pettigrew should have been part of the story - he did play an important role in James and Lily's life so loathsome charactor that he is, he should've been in the story.
Author's Response: In the first draft of this fic I DID have Pettigrew, but I couldn't write him. He was completely OOC and it was easier to just drop him completely :P
I really like this story. It's a perfect idea. You did a really good job on this.
I like how she liked him for a long time but he was to cocky. I could see that happening.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :D
Great job, the characterization was perfect, the narration beautiful, and the plot enjoyable. The dialog was also fantastic, might I add. Over all, great, great, great!
I was afraid at first that Lily would be WAY too far out of character, but then, grief does do strange things to people. I'm glad you like it!
P.S.--I noticed on your info page that you like Tamora Pierce...me too! The Circle of Magic series are my absolute favorites of hers.
i love it! Its really sweet... and a GREAT idea
Author's Response: aww thanks! I'm really proud of this, considering hardly anything I write ever gets finished, let alone get posted where anyone can read it. I'm glad you like it! :D