Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 05/13/10 10:46
Chapter: Another year, another...fight?

I liked this story, a lot. But I still think that Pettigrew should have been part of the story - he did play an important role in James and Lily's life so loathsome charactor that he is, he should've been in the story.

~Soraya~

Author's Response: In the first draft of this fic I DID have Pettigrew, but I couldn't write him. He was completely OOC and it was easier to just drop him completely :P

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/14/09 19:43
Chapter: Another year, another...fight?

I really like this story. It's a perfect idea. You did a really good job on this.

I like how she liked him for a long time but he was to cocky. I could see that happening.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :D

Reviewer: roaringruthie125
Date: 03/22/09 16:51
Chapter: Another year, another...fight?

Great job, the characterization was perfect, the narration beautiful, and the plot enjoyable. The dialog was also fantastic, might I add. Over all, great, great, great!

Author's Response:

I was afraid at first that Lily would be WAY too far out of character, but then, grief does do strange things to people. I'm glad you like it!

P.S.--I noticed on your info page that you like Tamora Pierce...me too! The Circle of Magic series are my absolute favorites of hers.

Reviewer: swimmer7
Date: 03/14/09 15:36
Chapter: Another year, another...fight?

i love it! Its really sweet... and a GREAT idea

Author's Response: aww thanks! I'm really proud of this, considering hardly anything I write ever gets finished, let alone get posted where anyone can read it. I'm glad you like it! :D

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