Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 08/16/09 20:51
Chapter: Fit the First - The Beginning

I really liked this poem. It was very charming and fun to read. The fight between Crookshanks and Ron is very believable though I'm not totally sure about his fight with the House-elf, but it was really fun to read none-the-less. hehe. :) Great job! I can really understand why you decided not to finish it. I know how hard it is to write such poems. Cyns

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this! It was tough but fun, I'm glad I posted it so others could read it and enjoy it. I did start another one but it's too exhausting, lol. Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: snivellicious
Date: 03/26/09 16:07
Chapter: Fit the First - The Beginning

this was absolutely brilliant! i really hope you finish the second part, i'd love to read it. i definitely believe you when you say it's harder than it looks because i can barely rhyme two lines, let alone an entire ballad.

Author's Response: There are actually eight parts to the entire poem, I believe. O.o Like I said, I started it but I really don't think I could finish it - I'm no Lewis Carroll. So I refer you to the original if you want to read more. :) Thanks so much for reading this one, and for leaving such a nice review, I really appreciate it!! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: Spottedcat
Date: 03/25/09 22:16
Chapter: Fit the First - The Beginning

Oh, come on! Finish it! I want to know what they all do!

And excellent work. It's hard to write so many stanzas that rhyme, have the right number of feet, and even make sense! (Well, as much sense as anything can make with Luna...)

Author's Response: Oh Spottedcat, I have no idea what they all do. Do you have any idea how long this poem is?? It's really amazing what Lewis Carroll accomplished - and in rhyme! It was tough enough to just get this far. Whew! Thank you for reading it, though. I know I posted it on my LJ but felt it was finally time to get it out of the dusty folder and share it. I really appreciate the review!! ~Gina :)

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