Reviewer: raquel
Date: 04/22/11 10:24
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Make that Hr/H

Reviewer: raquel
Date: 04/22/11 10:23
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Very interesting beginning. The most intersting one I've read so far as H/G stories on this sight

Reviewer: gryffindorbabes
Date: 06/12/09 18:17
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

love the story

Author's Response: Thank you very much for liking my story. I'm hoping to put up chapter 2 soon. Its just that RL is simply out of hand right now.

Reviewer: gryffindorbabes
Date: 06/12/09 18:14
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

love the story

Reviewer: Black-Sand
Date: 04/23/09 7:33
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

G'day

I READ IT! STOP MAKING ME FEEL GUILTY!

I loved the description. The last paragraph is my favourite and no not because it was the last one! XD.

LOL, at first I thought Harry had forgotten Aarons birthday. I laughed when I realized it was his own.

Oh, and I should tell you. I have this wonderful beta and she writes the best story's. Have you read it? I have! LOL

Update soon.

...xXxLove SandyxXx...

Author's Response: Thank you very much for liking my story. I'm hoping to put up chapter 2 soon. Its just that RL is simply out of hand right now.

Reviewer: Felix Felishus
Date: 04/17/09 21:58
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

I really enjoyed this. Great description and I'm anxious to see how this story will pan out.

Reviewer: Tim the Enchanter
Date: 04/17/09 10:23
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Hello, Wilfen,

I’ve never actually read a Harmony fic before, so this is the first time reading about this pairing. Anyway, this was a very good beginning – it gives just enough details to get me hooked, and it makes me want to find out the answers to the big gaping holes. There are many questions I want to know the answer to, like who are the people “who willingly gave up their lives for him,” and what makes Harry prefer Hermione over Ginny like in canon?

Anyway, excellent job on your very first fanfic, and Happy Easter!

Tim the Enchanter

Reviewer: Dracoloversnake
Date: 04/14/09 23:31
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Wow great job hurry up and finish the chapter! I like it!

Author's Response:

Dear Dracoloversnake ,

Thank you for your comment. The second chapter is a little longer than the previous one so I guess people will have to wait a bit. But, I'm pretty glad that you liked my writing.

Love

Wilfen

Reviewer: masterwoods
Date: 04/13/09 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

AHH! Something fresh.

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 04/13/09 11:37
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Hoping the second chapter makes more sense. This is a little disjointed, but I am intregued and want to read more. Please continue.

Author's Response:

Dear Quilter Signed,

Thank you for your comments. The reason its still a little mysterious is because this is the first chapter. Lots more coming so stay tuned.

Love

Wilfen

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