Reviewer: raquel
Date: 04/22/11 10:24
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Make that Hr/H

Reviewer: raquel
Date: 04/22/11 10:23
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Very interesting beginning. The most intersting one I've read so far as H/G stories on this sight

Reviewer: gryffindorbabes
Date: 06/12/09 18:17
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

love the story

Author's Response: Thank you very much for liking my story. I'm hoping to put up chapter 2 soon. Its just that RL is simply out of hand right now.

Reviewer: gryffindorbabes
Date: 06/12/09 18:14
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

love the story

Reviewer: Black-Sand
Date: 04/23/09 7:33
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

G'day

I READ IT! STOP MAKING ME FEEL GUILTY!

I loved the description. The last paragraph is my favourite and no not because it was the last one! XD.

LOL, at first I thought Harry had forgotten Aarons birthday. I laughed when I realized it was his own.

Oh, and I should tell you. I have this wonderful beta and she writes the best story's. Have you read it? I have! LOL

Update soon.

...xXxLove SandyxXx...

Author's Response: Thank you very much for liking my story. I'm hoping to put up chapter 2 soon. Its just that RL is simply out of hand right now.

Reviewer: Felix Felishus
Date: 04/17/09 21:58
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

I really enjoyed this. Great description and I'm anxious to see how this story will pan out.

Reviewer: Tim the Enchanter
Date: 04/17/09 10:23
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Hello, Wilfen,

I’ve never actually read a Harmony fic before, so this is the first time reading about this pairing. Anyway, this was a very good beginning – it gives just enough details to get me hooked, and it makes me want to find out the answers to the big gaping holes. There are many questions I want to know the answer to, like who are the people “who willingly gave up their lives for him,” and what makes Harry prefer Hermione over Ginny like in canon?

Anyway, excellent job on your very first fanfic, and Happy Easter!

Tim the Enchanter

Reviewer: Dracoloversnake
Date: 04/14/09 23:31
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Wow great job hurry up and finish the chapter! I like it!

Author's Response:

Dear Dracoloversnake ,

Thank you for your comment. The second chapter is a little longer than the previous one so I guess people will have to wait a bit. But, I'm pretty glad that you liked my writing.

Love

Wilfen

Reviewer: masterwoods
Date: 04/13/09 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

AHH! Something fresh.

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 04/13/09 11:37
Chapter: Chapter 1- The Shadows of the Dead

Hoping the second chapter makes more sense. This is a little disjointed, but I am intregued and want to read more. Please continue.

Author's Response:

Dear Quilter Signed,

Thank you for your comments. The reason its still a little mysterious is because this is the first chapter. Lots more coming so stay tuned.

Love

Wilfen

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Impossible Task of Being by Ashlumos1888 6th-7th Years
A penniless thief, a carefree prankster, the school's golden boy, a rich player...
Out of the Blue by Secret Marauder 90 1st-2nd Years
This story weaves the tale of James and Lily from the day they met right up...
A Squib's Journey by ntoforhp 6th-7th Years
Jeffery Potter always had sensed he was somehow different from his playmates...
FEATURED
Going Against Salazar's Grain by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
"Sometimes," said Dumbledore, "we sort too soon." Originally writtten for...
Whispers in the Night by lucca4 6th-7th Years
"Swear to me, Cissy. Swear you won't tell." It's a secret, and it haunts...
Fear and Loathing in Florida (Mostly Loathing) by minnabird 3rd-5th Years
Scabior and Greyback had to escape the Aurors somehow - they just hadn't expected...
Just Before Healing by WeasleyMom 3rd-5th Years
With Hannah, things always go to yellow.
In Bloom by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 3rd-5th Years
It figures that he ignores the other side of roses. Thorns fit to draw blood...
Magical by Nagini Riddle 1st-2nd Years
Ginny and her brothers sneak down the stairs to look at presents, but instead...
CATEGORIES