Reviewer: ejoemily
Date: 10/04/09 4:38
Chapter: Another Shared Moment

Very believable!!! It is very canon and that works great, what with the choice between Sirius and Tonks, and the nature of Remus and Sirius relationship is what I would have guessed, only well-written!

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 08/11/09 5:14
Chapter: Another Shared Moment

Hmmm, *frowns*. Not sure what to say really... you've 'outed' my two favourite men. Not sure I can ever talk to you again. Okay, jokes over, it's a good story and you've portrayed their relationship very well - the adolescent romance born out of his stays in the hospital wing is very touching. I like that Remus had someone there for him. Talking about James and Lily is a wonderful moment. Sirius' guilt is heartbreaking and the tension when they both think of Lily is rather lovely - as if one of them felt more for her than they should have. (I have my theory)

Where I have a bit of a problem, is the end, because he's confessed his feelings for Tonks, yet still wants a fling with Sirius (and yes, I know it's one last time). I'm also wondering why Sirius would give his blessing to a relationship when Remus is being rather unfaithful already (okay that's a bit harsh as Remus isn't with Tonks at the moment). Mind you, that kinda speaks volumes about Sirius' morals - ha ha.

I have a few nitpics:

‘Nothing better? Then to kill a friend?’ I think that should be 'than'. and there was somewhere else where you wrote 'hand threw his hair' I think you mean through - although that could be an American spelling, I'm not sure.

Good story, but I think this means you've forfeited any rights to Mr Black and he can return to Remus and me. *snort*

Love ya,

Carole xxx

Reviewer: Nez
Date: 08/04/09 18:38
Chapter: Another Shared Moment

Hey!

I really enjoyed this little story. It shows a bond they have and explores their past too. The part with Sirius coming to visit Remus was actually quite touching.

Life is too short, Moony.

And of course, the power of.. a sort of irony, I suppose, always gets to me.

Nit-picking here - I don’t know where we lost him, where we failed him, but it is the only think I can think of. - I think in should be 'the only thinG I can think of.'

So, another great story!
All the best,
~Nez

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 07/15/09 15:13
Chapter: Another Shared Moment

Excellent analysis of our Peter, and of Sirius and Remus. I love it when Moony's such a stick-in-the-mud!

Reviewer: iamlordvoldemort
Date: 07/05/09 21:25
Chapter: Another Shared Moment

Sirius and Remus should get married. Hmph that's my opinion and I'm as stubborn as he is.
"Life is too short, Moony" nearly had me in tears. oh Sirius *sniff sniff* he's my favorite character.
Great story :-)

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