Reviews For I'll Pick You Up
Reviewer: spiritedhobo
Date: 02/16/14 16:08
Chapter: Epilogue

Why was this story so sexist ?

Reviewer: spiritedhobo
Date: 02/16/14 16:08
Chapter: Epilogue

Why was this story so sexist ?

Reviewer: Dracoisbeast
Date: 11/17/12 0:52
Chapter: Epilogue

That. Was. Incredible. I was so pulled into this! Oh, I was so sad when it ended! I loved how you explained things that J.K. Rowling casually left out like how the Map was taken. So well written! Definetely a perfect story to read first by you. I hope to read more James/Lily multichapters by you in the near future!

Reviewer: CatchtheSnitch
Date: 07/14/12 15:01
Chapter: Epilogue


Reviewer: Meems
Date: 06/23/12 18:51
Chapter: I Won't Back Down


Reviewer: leckleck
Date: 05/12/12 2:29
Chapter: Epilogue

Again.. this was absolutely amazing, brilliant, PERFECT. Epilogue actually had me in tears, partly from the flawless writing and partly from the emotion.. SO GOOD. When I reread the books, I think of this fan fiction as what actually occurred between James and Lily, ahh! And I picture the epilogue being what happened, omg. I just can't. I loved this so much, the best fan fiction I've ever read. You had the perfect amount of hilarious dialogue, fluff, and angst/dark material. Gorgeous writing, :)

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 03/19/12 23:27
Chapter: Epilogue

I absolutely love this story! You write the best (torturing for the reader :P) cliffhangers in all your stories! A perfect epilogue that really ties things up, too! You could honestly be JKR writing backstory... So, are you? :D
Are you writing anything currently?

Reviewer: Ginnypotter2699
Date: 02/19/12 5:09
Chapter: That Reminds You Not To Think

Veritaserum? It's supposed to reveal secrets isn't it. Anyway, I love J/L hogwarts fics(but not as much as H/G. So I like this too.

Reviewer: megank
Date: 01/30/12 6:07
Chapter: Epilogue

This was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful, I'm not sure how I haven't managed to stumble over this gem before. Your characters were fantastic, the plot well developed and clearly well thought out and the result is a truly enjoyable read. There were a few minor spelling/grammar errors but they didn't detract from the overall quality of your writing. And your dialogue - gosh, it's perfection. And this epilogue was just the icing on the cake, words cannot describe my love of it. To end it with Harry meeting Cassie; goodness, where do you even think of this brilliance? Thank you so much for sharing this story with us all, I look forward to reading your other work! x

Reviewer: hufflepuffatheart
Date: 12/31/11 18:15
Chapter: Epilogue

Really lovely. The plot, the romance, the twists and turns, the mystery, the humour, the characterization. All great. Nice work!

Reviewer: hufflepuffatheart
Date: 12/31/11 18:14
Chapter: Epilogue

Really lovely. The plot, the romance, the twists and turns, the mystery, the humour, the characterization. All great. Nice work!

Reviewer: ButterBeerBoy
Date: 12/01/11 12:55
Chapter: It's Not Your Fault It Gets This Hard

honestly i think it's one of the best chapters

Reviewer: rebecca_blackfails
Date: 11/06/11 22:56
Chapter: I Can Be Anything

N'aww! I LOVE THIS! I read this when it was first released and I kept reading until it was finished, I haven't been on this sight in about six months and I came back and read this again, it's amazing! The sex scene was a tad awkward, but then again, aren't they akways?! Really good job, please write another Lily/James?:')

Reviewer: RedWolf-2323
Date: 10/21/11 23:52
Chapter: It's Not Your Fault It Gets This Hard

This is a good one. I really like this story. It was the first fanfiction I ever read, and its also the reason my social life dropped down immensely. Lol. You're really good as far as grammar, and spelling.

Reviewer: Pittsy
Date: 10/11/11 21:06
Chapter: Epilogue

This was amazing. I spent the entirety of the past three days reading this story. By the end I was sobbing. I hadn't realised how much I cared until Harry met Cassie and I completely broke down. BRAVO! One of the best fanfics, one of the best Lily/James stories I have ever read.

Reviewer: AmityS
Date: 07/31/11 14:22
Chapter: I Can Be Anything

Wow. This is by far my favorite story on the entire site. Great job! I might re-read this! Which is saying alot, because it is a fan fiction and not the actual books. I loved the whole thing, except for the Voldemort part. It seemed awkward and it didn't fit with the rest of the story. Either than that, it was absolutely brilliant! The plot was amazing, and Lily falling in love with James was not too slow or too fast. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Reviewer: dspotter
Date: 07/19/11 12:25
Chapter: It's Not Your Fault It Gets This Hard

I loved James' memory! I love it when guys have the little relatives and it's just so cute when act all brotherly and caring.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked that! :)

Reviewer: whorecruxes
Date: 07/10/11 13:32
Chapter: Epilogue

So lovely! You're such an amazing writer and all the charcters were written perfectly! Espesically Voldemort & Peter, some people just don't seem to get how they talk and act. Love, love, love, this;

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm so glad you liked it -- and that you liked how I wrote Voldemort; I was really nervous about writing him.

Reviewer: potterboy11
Date: 06/16/11 21:26
Chapter: Epilogue

i loved this story especially the part with Cassie and Harry at the end.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked how it ended :)

Reviewer: kaffca
Date: 04/28/11 2:25
Chapter: Epilogue

loved your story!! it was good. the romance was good, and so were capturing most of the characters, but the OC's were poorly made. sorry!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it--thanks for the review!

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