That. Was. Incredible. I was so pulled into this! Oh, I was so sad when it ended! I loved how you explained things that J.K. Rowling casually left out like how the Map was taken. So well written! Definetely a perfect story to read first by you. I hope to read more James/Lily multichapters by you in the near future!
OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!! SO MANY EMOTIONS!!!!
THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TALENT!!!!!:-)
Again.. this was absolutely amazing, brilliant, PERFECT. Epilogue actually had me in tears, partly from the flawless writing and partly from the emotion.. SO GOOD. When I reread the books, I think of this fan fiction as what actually occurred between James and Lily, ahh! And I picture the epilogue being what happened, omg. I just can't. I loved this so much, the best fan fiction I've ever read. You had the perfect amount of hilarious dialogue, fluff, and angst/dark material. Gorgeous writing, :)
I absolutely love this story! You write the best (torturing for the reader :P) cliffhangers in all your stories! A perfect epilogue that really ties things up, too! You could honestly be JKR writing backstory... So, are you? :D
Are you writing anything currently?
Veritaserum? It's supposed to reveal secrets isn't it. Anyway, I love J/L hogwarts fics(but not as much as H/G. So I like this too.
This was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful, I'm not sure how I haven't managed to stumble over this gem before. Your characters were fantastic, the plot well developed and clearly well thought out and the result is a truly enjoyable read. There were a few minor spelling/grammar errors but they didn't detract from the overall quality of your writing. And your dialogue - gosh, it's perfection. And this epilogue was just the icing on the cake, words cannot describe my love of it. To end it with Harry meeting Cassie; goodness, where do you even think of this brilliance? Thank you so much for sharing this story with us all, I look forward to reading your other work! x
Really lovely. The plot, the romance, the twists and turns, the mystery, the humour, the characterization. All great. Nice work!
Really lovely. The plot, the romance, the twists and turns, the mystery, the humour, the characterization. All great. Nice work!
honestly i think it's one of the best chapters
N'aww! I LOVE THIS! I read this when it was first released and I kept reading until it was finished, I haven't been on this sight in about six months and I came back and read this again, it's amazing! The sex scene was a tad awkward, but then again, aren't they akways?! Really good job, please write another Lily/James?:')
This is a good one. I really like this story. It was the first fanfiction I ever read, and its also the reason my social life dropped down immensely. Lol. You're really good as far as grammar, and spelling.
This was amazing. I spent the entirety of the past three days reading this story. By the end I was sobbing. I hadn't realised how much I cared until Harry met Cassie and I completely broke down. BRAVO! One of the best fanfics, one of the best Lily/James stories I have ever read.
Wow. This is by far my favorite story on the entire site. Great job! I might re-read this! Which is saying alot, because it is a fan fiction and not the actual books. I loved the whole thing, except for the Voldemort part. It seemed awkward and it didn't fit with the rest of the story. Either than that, it was absolutely brilliant! The plot was amazing, and Lily falling in love with James was not too slow or too fast. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
I loved James' memory! I love it when guys have the little relatives and it's just so cute when act all brotherly and caring.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked that! :)
So lovely! You're such an amazing writer and all the charcters were written perfectly! Espesically Voldemort & Peter, some people just don't seem to get how they talk and act. Love, love, love, this;
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm so glad you liked it -- and that you liked how I wrote Voldemort; I was really nervous about writing him.
i loved this story especially the part with Cassie and Harry at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked how it ended :)
loved your story!! it was good. the romance was good, and so were capturing most of the characters, but the OC's were poorly made. sorry!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it--thanks for the review!
As always you've had me entranced start to finish, and most of all i'm absolutely chuffed that i guessed the killer was Regulus way back, something like chapter 6!
Content-wise, i think you said in an A/N at somepoint that Lily needed 'sass' and you were exactly right, i think i've liked your Lily much more than some others, a very three dimensional character. I really thought that you handled the whole Sirius/Regulus relationship very well too, especially the final bit with Sirius refusing to have Regulus given up, it really did leave me with feelings of that it clearly couldn't be a total resolution.
As for your other characters, Marlene was definitely interesting, but perhaps we didn't seem to get to know Lenore enough, i don't know, just seemed a pretty 'painless' death...
The James/Lily stuff was perfect and believable though, while the epilogue with Harry and Cassie was a lovely touch.
Yeah, i loved it though.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it--and I'm impressed that you guessed it was Regulus so early! Good job! :)
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I love this storyline!!! Seriously!!!
James Potter has actually been foreshadowed by the brilliant sensitivity of Lily Evans and Sirius Black!!! I dunno, but I really love that idea of them being siblings, and Sirius breaking someone's nose for her... :D!
And I love Harry's 24th birthday present.... Cassie's such a sweetheart :)
And about Peter.... there's always so much about Peter that's shrouded with secrets.... But the clearest fact, I see you know, is that he is forever wrapped in guilt, which finally suffocates him in the end... As a Marauder, he was good, wasn't he? Hogwarts kept them as they were... Now, the dangers in the outside... caused poor, stupid Peter to get so abysmally deluded about some facts... (sigh)
Three cheers and a heary applause from me,
Maitri Harys...
P.S. - Sirius Black is my favorite character ever, closely followed up by Regulus and James. I mean, who else has those guts???!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it! And I completely agree about Peter. The evils of the real world were too much for him, sadly :/
