Whoaaaaaaaaa you are an insanely good writer! James and Lily's fight was epic and completely believable, I was floored that it was planned. And Grace.... tsk tsk. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the fight could throw you for a loop :) The next chapter should be up soon!
I KNEW IT!! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!! That little sneak! Grrr I knew she was bad news from the begininng... I mean why would she keep going back to an abusive boyfriend it totally didn't make sensee... I KNEW IT!!! When James and Lily started to fight I had absolutely no idea to where this was going but I felt that it was all fakee. I KNEW ITT!!! Update sooon pleasee(:
Author's Response: Haha, there were definitely a lot of bad signs pointing at her. I will definitely try to update soon! Thanks for the review :)
I KNEW IT!!!! (Okay, i didn't really realise it was Grace but I knew it was a girl as soon as Lily was talking about how much she was going to kill 'him'!)
What a twist, eh? And there was a great build up of suspense too! I'm not going to babble on and on, but, fabby! Next one up soon, pleeeeeease!
Little Miss Witch x
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked the build up and the twist :) I will try to update as soon as I can, I promise! Thanks for the review.
Wow great ending with the possibility that Grace is the killer, looking forward for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
for a few moments I was really ANGRY with you!!!
i was keep saying "what the hell?????"
thank god this fight thing was fake!!
anyway, i loved ths way Lili finds out about the sweater-great imagination!!
PS: i am really sorry if i make any mistakes but i am from Greece and I do english only at school...
Author's Response: I was hoping I might fool a few people for a minute or two -- but I definitely couldn't have actually had that fight! I'm glad you liked how Lily found out; thanks for the review! And don't worry about your English -- it's near perfect, as far as I can see :)
WHY DO ALL GOOD STORIES HAVE SO MANY CLIFFIES????????
Update soon, please! I think I might go insane if you don't.
Author's Response: It's because authors become addicted to cliffhangers -- it's a sickness, I swear! I'll definitely try to update soon :) Thanks for the review.
MERLIN! It was Grace?! For the last chapter, I didn't even review because as soon as I saw that Lenore died I freaked out and shut the laptop! This was such an intense chapter! And really sad =[ I'm really proud of myself though, because I guessed that their fight was fake. Yay! But please update soon! I really need to find out what happens! This is one of my favorite stories on this site! Ahhh! Keep writing!!
Author's Response: Haha, yes, Grace. Good job guessing that the fight was fake! I'm glad you liked this chapter and like the story -- a favourite on the site is high praise! Thanks for the review. I'll definitely try to update soon -- I know I ended this one in an evil way. ;)
Oh my God...I got scared there thinking that James and Lily had actually broken up or something! Brilliant chapter, as always. I still don't think it's Grace who killed Jilly and Lenore, but I can't for the life of me figure out who did! It's really frustrating, to be honest. Usually, with crime novels and stuff, I can figure out the perpetrator really early in the story. This one is really hard, though. Keep it up, hope the next chapter comes up soon!
Author's Response: Oh, I couldn't really break them up -- and if they did fight, James would never be that terrible! I'm glad I can keep you guessing -- you'll find out soon enough! Thanks for the review.
can not wait
oh and one more word-
Author's Response: Haha, thanks :) I'm glad you liked it!
OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD.
That's it, really.
Author's Response: :)
I KNEW their fight couldn't be real! I just knew it! Fantastic chapter! Intense, but fantastic. And the poor map; never to be seen again until Fred and George. Wow. I don't want this story to end! It's too good!
Author's Response: It definitely was intense! Yes, even if they fought, I can't EVER imagine James treating her that way. And oh, poor map, indeed. I'm glad you liked this chapter; thanks very much for the review :)
i'm holdin my breath till you update!
and maybe an anti-cliffie picket sign too.
Author's Response: This was a pretty awful cliffhanger, wasn't it? I'll definitely try to update soon! Thanks for the review.
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AMAZINGGGGGGGGG!!!!! I just caught up on your story-- got the link from LJ--and it's amazing! I love your characterization of everyone! Definitely how I've pictured them! I recc'd this story to my sister and she loves it too! I can't wait for some more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad I you liked this and even rec'd it and I'm glad I managed to pull somebody over from LJ -- I wasn't sure how many people would even read that monster of a post! The next chapter is in the queue right now :)
LOVE IT!!!!!! I'm not sure if I've favorite'd this yet, but it most certainly is great.
An avid fan of your work,
Nymphie THE Original
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it :)
oh wow that was so...unexpected? i did not even see that coming. i kind of expected Lenore to be somehow involved in Jilly's murdered if not the person who murdered her. But know she's dead too and with her what she wanted to tell Lily...
James' birthday was so sweet and Sirius was very funny in this chapter we don't really get to see much of him...
can't wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Lenore's death was actually something I debated with myself; I almost killed someone else, but at the last minute decided it would be her. I'm sort of happy it took you by surprise -- I like surprises :) I'm glad you liked James's birthday and Sirius in this chapter. I'm also a little nervous writing Sirius, so I don't include as much of him as would probably be in a story from James's POV . . . he has some HUGE scenes coming up, though! Thanks for the review.
wow life has been so busy i haven't been able to review this chapter or the next one though i read them both ages ago.
i liked the conversation with grace it really gave me more of intake on her point view why she's so angry and i don't think she murdered Jilly though i could be wrong...
the memory had me in tears...as did the end of this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you finally found the time to review it :) This conversation did touch deeper on Grace than anything previously had, so I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
ive absolutely loved this and cant wait to read the rest :) i have a couple theories but they seem way to stupid to tell you :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it :) And I'm sure you're theories are good -- you'll find out if they're right soon!
That was a little harsh, Muglenet, cutting me off like that :(
Author's Response: Haha ;)
I'm sorry, but you have to update very VERY soon, otherwise i will spontaneously combust! What a cliffhanger! At first I thought it was just nasty Slytherins, but then I was edging towards Peter, but then Regulus suddenly appeared and..and... What, on earth did Lenore know that meant she had to be killed??? And isn't Lily forgetting something... Like the fact she used to be best friends with a Slytherin, who she could quite easily wangle information from?! And Grace... don't get me started on her! She so knows more than she let on... She was arguing with one of the baddies, and to be perfectly honest, I think she is more involved in everthing than Tate. Annnnnnd, what was Lily doing? That she ignored Lenore and said she had to do something with 'Marlie'! James was a tad slow there..
But I loved the part where Lily said she would care for Grace, and the 'dinner' was very well-written. Aww, James+Lily=
Author's Response: I will definitely try to update soon -- I know that was an awful cliffhanger to leave it on! Thanks very much for the review. You're certainly asking all the right questions, but that's all I'm saying! ;) I'm glad you liked the interaction between Lily and Grace and the birthday "dinner."