Reviews For Snowflakes
Reviewer: downwiththepinktoad
Date: 06/14/15 14:52
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

This chapter was good, because of the way you word things and how you got right into the plot.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)

Reviewer: downwiththepinktoad
Date: 06/14/15 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

This chapter was good, because of the way you word things and how you got right into the plot.

Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 06/02/13 17:12
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Trial

I have literally just discovered this fic today and I love it! By the first few chapters I was hooked, and in a way I'm glad I've only found it now because I didn't have to wait between the 21 chapters. However - please write more soon! Even just a resolution to the story would be amazing but I love your writing so please continue!
Georgie :)

Author's Response: Hello! I know it's been a while but I've finally put up the last chapter! Sorry it took so long :P Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: arya828
Date: 12/06/12 10:36
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Chat


Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Just so you know, the last chapter has been put up!

Reviewer: arya828
Date: 12/06/12 10:33
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Bad News

soft spot for Jim.. my foot, hell no.. wish he gets hexed :P

Reviewer: arya828
Date: 12/06/12 10:17
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Hot Chocolate Social


Reviewer: arya828
Date: 12/06/12 9:50
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Buffet

hilarious!! one of the funniest ive read in a loooooong time!!

Reviewer: arya828
Date: 12/06/12 9:35
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

wow!!!! so far, so good....!! cant wait to

Reviewer: Erised1433
Date: 12/03/12 2:11
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

This is one of my favorite stories! Excellent work! Is another chapter coming anytime soon?

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! The last chapter was actually just put up, so it's finally finished. (I don't know if anyone is getting emails about it because I haven't been getting notification emails for the story) I hope you like the last chapter!

Reviewer: Tiger-Lily
Date: 07/15/12 13:45
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Trial

excellent chapter although please update soon
i love the ending with the little comments about humor and what not :) keep up the good woork

Author's Response: Hello after a long long time the final chapter is up! Thanks for reading hope you enjoy the ending after all this time :)

Reviewer: llilli
Date: 07/10/12 13:55
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Attack

This is such a great story and you are such a great writer! I like how Lily is really good friends with the marauders now and of course how she's in a relationship with James.
The only problem i have are the spells! Like i expected that the death eaters would use more powerful spells and so would Lily, James and Sirius remember, if you dont know many actual spells from the books just make some up! A lot of writers do and no one would know if they didnt say anything.
But all in all its a fantastic story and I can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you! I agree, the spells could have been more advanced... I'll keep that in mind if I write any more stories! But hey! After a long time, the last chapter is finally up! I hope you are able to read it and enjoy the finale! Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: FivepointstoGryffindor
Date: 07/02/12 2:37
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Trial

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I LOVE this fanfiction (I have read it 4 times) And can not wait any longer! You are such an amazing writer, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)


Author's Response: Woah, four times?? That's crazy! I'm pleased that you like it so much! Don't worry, the next chapter is currently being worked on and should be finished soon. Hopefully it will be posted in the near future! Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words :)

Reviewer: CarnivorousYaxley
Date: 06/26/12 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Trial

All I would liek to say is thank you so much for this! I have read it like 3 times! also, hurry with the next chapter because i keep checking and its ot here! :P

Author's Response: If you favorite the story, then you get an email notification and you don't need to keep checking! I really appreciate your dedication, though :) But don't fear, the next chapter is in the process!

Reviewer: CarnivorousYaxley
Date: 06/14/12 19:42
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

Oh my god this story is amazing! Thank you so much for this - i dont want to go on babbling like a mindless idiot about how amazing 'Snowflakes' is because you probably already know, but i would just like you to know that your writing about the marauders has really inspired me in my own writing. Not just that but i love reading it, so you'd better come out with the next chapter quickly!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you like it so much! I'm glad that I've helped inspire your own writing, that's absolutely wonderful :) I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it will be finished soon! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: FlameNox
Date: 05/18/12 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Trial

I have to say, you are an exceptionally good writer--reading through your story, I've been on edge, laughed, squeaked, hit random objects or people around me when I got excited--I'm usually a calm person and don't do things like that. Please don't take too long with the next chapter, I will be on tenterhooks until then. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you like this story! I'm finishing up school in two weeks, so hopefully I will have time to write the next chapter then :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: silverlining95
Date: 04/14/12 20:47
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Trial

I've just discovered this, and have spent the past couple of hours reading it from the beginning. I LOVE IT! Your plot is full of twists and turns, and keeps you guessing what on earth is going to happen next. I also think your characterisation is really good, all the canon characters are exactly how I'd imagine them to be, especially James and Sirius' camaraderie. Lily is lovely, just the right amount of 'goody two shoes', but still with a sense of humour and her caring nature.

I think Lily's dynamic with her muggle friends is fascinating, though one thing that bugged me was why were they only wondering NOW, after five/six years, what boarding school she's at? Wouldn't they have enquired before?

I'm fascinated as to what will happen next, though I have a few suspicions!

All in all, I hope you'll be posting a new chapter soon!

Author's Response: Wow, you got all the way through? That's awesome! Thank you so much for the kind words :) And yes... I would assume that Lily's friends should have been more curious about her schooling, but that's my bad. Anyway, it's always lovely to get a new reader! Hopefully, the next update wont take too long! Thanks for reading and reviewing, it's very much appreciated :)

Reviewer: walco
Date: 02/14/12 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Attack

You are never going to update, are you? Just make one bad guy get away with Lily or something. Anything. Please.

Author's Response: I've actually just submitted the next chapter, but I sincerely apologize for how long it has taken to update. I really appreciate how you, and so many others, have stuck around during this hiatus :) It's totally unacceptable on by part, but hopefully I can manage my time better and get these last few chapters up relatively soon! Sorry, again.

Reviewer: alishahpfan17
Date: 01/08/12 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Attack


Author's Response: I sincerely apologize for being so awful at updating this :( I promise the next chapter is in the works- it's been delayed do to severe writer's block and a butt-load of homework, unfortunately... Look out for it in the next couple of weeks, though :) Thanks so much for reading and hopefully I'll see you again very soon!

Reviewer: harryfan221
Date: 01/01/12 1:31
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

This is honestly the best fabric ever. I keep rechecking to see if you have updated:) I can't wait to find out what happens:) its the perfect story about lily and james. It's not to fake like the others. It's actually believeable. please update and finish soon

Author's Response: Aw, you're too kind :') I'm glad you like it so much! The next chapter is still in the process of being written, but until then, I highly recommend checking out any of MagEd's stories. She has some truly amazing and very believable fics about Lily and James :) Oh, and if you don't want to bother with having to recheck this page all the time, just hit the little "favorite" button and you'll get an email notification when the next chapter is up ;) Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review- it means a lot!

Reviewer: dspotter
Date: 12/27/11 2:07
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Attack

Please update! It's a really good story, you should finish it!

Author's Response: Hello! I know that this looks awful, because I literally haven't updated in, like, six months, but I can promise you that I wont abandon this story. The combination of hitting a writer's block, having ridiculous amounts of homework, and having finals looming overhead has sort of halted the progress of this fic, but things should be back to normal in about a week! Sorry this is kind of long, but I feel I owe you, and the other readers, an apology :) So thank you so much for reading and hopefully I'll see you very soon!

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