Reviews For Renaissance
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/26/09 17:53
Chapter: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

when are you going to update?
even on the other sie, notin' has been happening! i check, and there are still only seven chapter!!! or therer is somethin' wrong w/ my internet. which prevents me from continuing to read this fic. i doubt that
*stops self from ranting*
come on! you were supposed to be away ONE WEEK. hmpf.

Author's Response: lmao, all right, see, the thing is, after I came back from that vacation, I had to run about like a mad chicken trying to get passports done and cleaning and packing, because on August 23 I hopped on a plane for England, where I have been since. Lmao! I'm so sorry about the lack of updates - Cherry pretty much wrote chapter seven by herself, and I've had it for weeks needing to go through it and edit. XD I'll get on it ASAP, I promise. I'll be in England till December 3rd, so however many chapters we write in the next few months will probably be utterly Briticized and accurate, and probably accidentally loaded with unnecessary cultural info. XD So I apologize in advance. Anyway, I will get my lazy arse in gear, but for the last two weeks I've been in Scotland and have been getting settled back in England the last few days - but now I have whole days ahead of me to work on my writing, so I will get it into gear! I'm so glad to have actual fan harrassment though. ^____^ It makes me feel all warm inside. Heheh. All the best from the lovely UK, -Kirby

Date: 08/16/09 14:37
Chapter: Chapter 3: My Mother's Shame

I usually don't like AU fics (especially Remus has a sister ones) and I actually started reading this to make fun of how Mary-Sue-ish it was gonna be.
But now I am addicted!
Update as soon as you can!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/24/09 1:03
Chapter: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

lol haha, sorry and thanks :P
and as i don't have an account over at the other site, i'll rebiew the chapters as sooen as they get posted here, i promise!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol you don't actually need an account. but whatever you're more comfortable with is awesome with me! ^_^

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/23/09 17:13
Chapter: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

ummm... what link??? I looked over at HPFF, andI think I found the story, but somehow it sais there is only one chapter.... although I might be doing something wrong, as I said, I don't usually use HPFF....

Author's Response: Click on the words "this link" in the last response. It'll take you to Not HPFF, lol. HPFF takes 10 days to validate. x.x

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/23/09 15:43
Chapter: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

haha, all right. You're welcome!!! It really is a great story (: ... you have some on Maybe I should continue to read there.... but I like MuggleNet so much more..... Well, keep it up! Your loyal readers are waiting!!! (no pressure)

Author's Response: Have submitted the new chapter to MuggleNet, so it should be up in a day or two. If you get really anxious, you can read up to chapter six at this link. But if you'd rather read it here, that's great too, I will always keep the goodness coming (although I gotta say, chapter six is... well, it's truly fabulous, if I do say so myself... haha)! Just remember to keep the reviews coming for every chapter, because I love 'em!!! Adoringly, Kirby ;)

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 07/23/09 10:03
Chapter: Chapter 3: My Mother's Shame

wow whole lot of back story on fera interesting keep up the quick updates love reading this story

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 07/23/09 2:42
Chapter: Chapter 3: My Mother's Shame

Yey im so excited... it took some looking and goggling but i found your story on

Author's Response: Lol go you! Smart Googler. Don't forget to leave reviews! Haha.

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 07/23/09 2:28
Chapter: Chapter 3: My Mother's Shame

Awesome chapter... slowly I start to understand who is who and what lead them there

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/23/09 1:52
Chapter: Chapter 3: My Mother's Shame

Uhhh, it was marvelous!!!!!!!!!!!! Really good job portraying the emotions.....
I have a couple questions/comments. Firtly, wouldn't someone, Hermione for example, have noticed the name 'Lupin' in the Prohet, if she read her article? And I don't thiink Hogwarts would be open without any protection, even in th esummer, after all, the Death Eaters could judt like hide out there or place like, I don't know, a bomb or something somewhere in Hogwarts.....
I really can't wait for them all seeing each other again, and grrrreat job with the memories, they were so realistic!!!

Author's Response: yoouuuuuuu are too clever for your own good! lol. Hermione, I hadn't caught, I'll go ahead and admit that - though I was tempted to pretend I'd already thought of that. ;p But thank you so much for pointing it out, as now, I can fix it. As for Hogwarts, don't worry, we touch on that in chapter six. But it was a brilliant catch! I'll be quite honest with you - because we post this story mostly to (which doesn't have a verification system), the MuggleNet posting is WAY behind. I'm putting the finishing touches on chapter six right now, in fact! but I'm posting new chapters up on MuggleNet almost the second they get verified, so they're coming to you as fast as I can make them. But THANK YOU for being such an AMAZING reader. Your reviews totally make my day! We've only got about four loyal readers so far (on ALL the sites we post to, lol), so we cherish them all individually. So again, THANK YOU for your support, it's what keeps us going! Lots of love, Wolf By Night (Kirby and Cherry, the authors)

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/19/09 0:13
Chapter: Chapter Two: Ghosts From the Past

oh, gosh. i can't find words to describe the awesome-ness of this chapter. I can't wait for the next one! Hope you post it soon, butb i have faith in you (*threatens*)

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 07/16/09 9:43
Chapter: Chapter One: A Laughable Proposal

decent chapter, can't wait to see why fey doesn't want sirius around, can't wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Stay tuned, as there's quite a LOT of reasons Fey doesn't want Sirius around! We love the support! <3 Wolf By Night

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/15/09 19:18
Chapter: Chapter One: A Laughable Proposal

uh!!! It was great! i admit I was -am- a little confused, but that held my attention, so it was fine (:
You wrote 'First the first time in a long time' shouldn't it be 'For the...'?
So who's that woman whose coming back? And Fera...............???

Reviewer: Karaley Dargen
Date: 07/15/09 5:35
Chapter: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

Just a short review, and I shall leave a longer one when I have more time (with the next chapter, for example *hinthintupdate*).

I thought your story was really great so far, and the character of Fera is so intriguing. It just makes me want to find out all about her – why is she so bitter, what does she do for a living, how well did she know Sirius... I'm dying to read more! I don't read many AU fics, but this one really looks promising. You can actually pull the "Remus has a sister"-thing without creating thousands of clichés and a Mary Sue. Fera really is a believable character, and I think it's amazing that you managed to show that with just the prologue so far.

Keep writing, I need to

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your interest and your praise! It means absolutely everything to us to know that people are watching and keeping up with the story. I'm SO glad to know that you love Fera, as she's like a child to me (sad, but true, especially since I've had her in my head for FIVE YEARS). Thanks again for the love, and stay tuned, because it's about to get exciting! <3 Wolf By Night

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 07/14/09 10:09
Chapter: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

well done, i like the first chapter. i always love most of these AU stories, this one seems that it will be really good, can't wait to see where you take it, keep up the great writting.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's so good to know that someone sees potential in this story. I have it on as well and have hardly gotten ANY reviews at all on there, which is very disheartening. So thank you so much in your encouragement!!

Reviewer: DragonDi
Date: 07/14/09 8:49
Chapter: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

Wow! This is a promising start to a story! Kept me hooked right from the beginning--and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I was worried it wasn't interesting enough at the beginning. =)

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/14/09 1:50
Chapter: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

WOW! I loved it so much!!! Where, oh where is the next chapter????!!!!!
A few Q&C, though. Once you forgot the 'o' from 'ago'. And the second part is at the end of the school year, right? And I LOVE the sister idea (: Was Fera also a Griffendor??? Why would wizards have a phone? And WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER??? You're a REALLY good writer!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the story so much! That's really exciting for me. Especially that you like Fera, as I've had her in my head for five years! She like my child. XD As for your questions, I'll just go ahead and answer them instead of making you "wait and see." I'm nice like that. XD just kidding. they have a phone because they're half bloods and they've always embraced the muggle world because they were raised by their muggle father. And yes, Fera was a Gryffindor too. Thank you so much for your enthusiasm and compliments! This review, along with others, totally made my day!

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