It's... good, but deathly short. Maybe you should add more details about what happened; her parent's reactions, Draco's reactions, what they did, how Hermione and Draco acted towards each other, if there were any sparks (maybe not), and how they acted towards each other after they got back to Hogwarts. This is just so... vague.
Author's Response: Yes, the length seems to be getting me into some trouble on this one. . . . Personally, I like the ambiguous nature the story leaves off on. I think it would cheapen the story to go into great detail about what happens AFTER Hermione invites Draco over; the point of the story is not that he went to her home, but that she DID invite him over, and that he DID accept. That said, we're all entitled to our opinions, and I do appreciate you taking the time to leave me a review! =)
Tres adorable! I'm a HUGE Dramione fan and I found unmitigated joy in reading this fic. I really do wish you could write a sequel to it. It's just so cute! Hermione is so surprising but,then again, so is Draco. His acceptance just emphasis's the magnitude of his loneliness, Well done, mate!
Author's Response: Well, thanks, dear! ^^ I think a sequel might spoil it, to be honest -- I'm a fan of some ambiguity. ;D But I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much. Thanks for leaving a review!
I think you should have writen more to it, it's good, and if you wrote more to it then it would be fantastic.vIt's a grat start to a great fic. It's just a shame there isn't more to it.
Author's Response: Yes, I seem to be getting many comments about the length! But I think I like this fic the way it is . . . I want the readers to be able to imagine the next scenario however they want. =) I'm glad you liked the fic despite its short length, and thank you for reviewing!
HA!!!that was good..Write more!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the fic! As for writing more, you're always welcome to check out my profile and see my other stories. =)
that was so cute and sweet, loved it !
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!
cute...kinda fluffy :)
Author's Response: Thank you! =)
You did quite the admirable job for someone who claims not to understand Draco & Hermione as a couple. You cover the bickering that they do and also get the intense interest that Dramoine shippers desire. Personally I don't always get what the catch is for the two. Your story is very readable. Thank you.
Author's Response: Well, thank YOU for leaving such a nice review! =D I try not to let my shipping preferences get in the way of me writing a fic, ha.
hehehe... kind of farfetched... I mean Draco was scheeming Dumbledore's death by then. Don't fancy him accepting Hermione's invitation to dinner. But it was a pleasant lovely read nevertheless.
It put a smile on my face the ending with them bickering like children that don't accept they are infatuated with each other. Addorable!!
Author's Response: I suppose you're right. But, in my defense, trying to kill Dumbledore is hard work. Draco could use a little distraction every now and then, hmm? =P I'm glad you liked the fic though. Thank you for reviewing!
Aww this was really cute. Hermione's got a lot of guts inviting him into her house. Hahaa nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! And, well, Hermione IS a Gryffindor. ;]