Reviewer: THEWITCHINTHECORNER
Date: 09/25/09 18:53
Chapter: You Are the Taste of Something Sweet

swicked dude

Author's Response: Ooh, thank you! If you care to, go ahead and read the next book, Stay Awake. If you like this one, I'm fairly certain you'll enjoy that. They're the same characters and whatnot. And of course, feel free to review that as well. ;D Thanks for R&Ring here! {BeccA}

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/31/09 20:29
Chapter: You Are the Taste of Something Sweet

And are they a gang. lol. I loved it, Becca! it was grrreat! They are so fuuuny. lol. And you are such an amazing author :) I love you Brothers and Sisters story (i checked- it's the one!!!), and I love this one! Do I remember correctly? Did you say a couple weeks ago that you didn't think you had a chance of publishing??? *scoffs* you so do!!!
I loved the 18/17 part. lol. And a lot of other parts, of course!
Its sad how they think they are going to part forever, isn't it? But good that they don't!!!
grrreat fic! *thinks becca should do more shameless self-advertisement*
Have you noticed that Jack and Zack rhyme? :p it kind of confused me at times *blushes*
uh, and I noticed that the twins are also in Huff and Claw.... lol

Author's Response: Heylo, Andi! Thanks for reviewing!!! Okay, I said the twins are 'Puffs and 'Claws? UGH! I'll have to fix that! Yeah, Maria was *supposed* to be in Gryffindor, but I think when I was editing in some of Russia's suggestions I screwed up and said that she was in whichever house I said here. Ugh. Anywho... I'm glad you think they're funny; I based some of thier personalities after myself, actually (I gave Jack my childishness, Holly my sarcasm, Alex my tendency to rebel and whatnot. I don't think I'm anything like Zack, though. Or Maria!) The 18/17 part was one of my favorites, as well. ;) I'm glad you think i'm amazing, though; that's a bit strange to hear that. And I really do think I don't stand a chance at being published, only because there are so many other people from my generation that would want to be authors and are much better than I am. I'm trying to perfect my style through fanfiction, which is one of the reasons why I write so much of it! Jack and Zack DO rhyme, don't they? Grr, stupid names.... I just loved the names, so i chose them. lol. Thanks for R&Ring!!! {BeccA}

Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 08/20/09 16:27
Chapter: You Are the Taste of Something Sweet

Becca, this was great! I can't wait for your companion fic. Your OC's were really well done, considering we are only seeing a five-minute snap-shot. Awesome stuff!

Author's Response: Thank you, Julia! At first I was worried about the story-in-five-minutes part, as most of the chapters I write span several hours/days. So I'm glad I pulled it off successfully. The OCs develop a bit more in the companion fic, as we get to see a bit about their families (especially Alex), but I meant for their personalities to be set up in this, so I'm glad that bit worked as well. The first chapter's been submitted, the second's with my beta, and the third's halfway done! I'll have a lot of time to write within the next week, though, so I hope the whole fic'll be up by the end of October! Thanks for R&Ring! {BeccA}

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 08/16/09 19:29
Chapter: You Are the Taste of Something Sweet

ooo! i cant wait for the fic! :D

Author's Response: Chapter one is up, chapter two is going to be submitted straight away, and chapter three is with my beta. That may not be up for a while though, because in itself it's more than 6000 words (and I'm SO not exaggerating there!). I'm working on chapter four now, though, and I hope I'll have it finished this weekend! {BeccA}

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 08/16/09 18:30
Chapter: You Are the Taste of Something Sweet

i did like that! You made some really good original characters and i liked how even though i just jumped into their last 5 minutes at hogwarts, it fells like i knew them so much more. good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! (I'm smiling so widely right now, you have no idea!) Holly was the easiest character to come up with; I was thinking about Hollywood (the city), and I really like the name Holly, so I wanted a character named that. Then I thought, Oliver Wood! So, Holly Wood! Jack's my favorite though; he's such a sweetie. His childish demeanor is something that I loosely based off of my own personality. I'm glad you like this, though; my beta suggested that I write a companion fic because she wanted to hear about the week they spend at Zack's. So I have a 7 chapter (one for each day) fic planned to be submitted soon. My beta has chapter one, and I have chapter two half written. It gives you more of a background on the characters as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing again! {BeccA}

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Chocolate Frog by L A Moody 3rd-5th Years
Amid the desolation of Diagon Alley, a tiny ray of hope lay buried. Nothing...
I Suspect Nargles by foolondahill17 3rd-5th Years
“No one’s ever kissed me before…. What is one to do now?” An extensive...
The Life and Times of Linnea Potter by Cantatrix 1st-2nd Years
Linnea Potter has lived under the tyranny of her relatives for the better part...
FEATURED
Glass over the Flame by the opaleye 3rd-5th Years
Harry, Hermione, and the moments in between. He doesn’t say that this...
Tom Riddle and the Chamber of Secrets by CanisMajor 3rd-5th Years
What really happened the last time someone let the Basilisk out? Harry Potter...
Red Squirrel/Sun Rises by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
+ He wouldn't celebrate his birthday, but his son had other ideas. + This was...
Sybill Trelawney and the Unexpected Gift by Squibstress 3rd-5th Years
Sybill Trelawney learns to live with her Inner Eye, cooking sherry, and Minerva...
Pat-a-Cake by foolondahill17 1st-2nd Years
Molly Weasley II, called Pat, and twenty-one lot and little-known facts. Or...
Wood by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
Marcus Flint, the infamous Super Seventh Captain of the Slytherin Quidditch...
CATEGORIES