Loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Recently the relationship between Harry and Teddy has become really interesting to me, and I loved your representation of it here. I especially thought that the characterisation of Harry was very good: it's difficult writing him as a father figure, because we've never seen him in that situation before, but you handled it with ease and grace. I could legitimately see this happening in these two characters' futures.
I also loved how you brought up the legacy of the Marauders, and ended with him planning to pass it over to James. The ending was poignant and beautiful.
I'd also love to read more about Teddy's time at Hogwarts now... :]
i loved it! fav part was when the map "talked to him!
Wow. This is an amazing story! The map made me laugh so hard, and I felt Teddy's pain about Remus and Tonks. It really is a great way to get over DH being over (although it really isn't). I really enjoyed this story. :)
i thought this was a beautiful story that really captured the love between harry and teddy. great job and please keep writing!!!!
uh, i loved this fic! it was so great. i liked how the mao was passed on to Teddy, the other marauders son... weird, huh, thinking that Harry and Teddy's dads were the same age, but Harry is so much older he's his godfather??? And I like that teddy leaves it for James.
Teddys characterization, as well as harry's, was very good. teddy's mixture between his mother and father was quite nice.
The picture, yes... I like the ones you chose, and I like that the big one was of all of the family.
and I liked how the malfoys wer included in the family. Nice.
Okay, I'm most defianetly gonna add this to my favs!!!
Wonderful! I think you captured Teddy perfectly. It was entertaining to read and well written. I loved it.
I enjoyed how you potrayed Teddy, he was really believable! I loved the part with the Marauders' Map.
Excellent! I love the thought of Teddy being able to control what Remus could not.
great job! :)
I really love this story. I love what Moony said on the map. It was so true and funny. You did an amaing job on this.