Reviewer: lily_severus_forever_love
Date: 07/21/11 12:48
Chapter: Prologue: The Summer Before Disaster

That's really good! I think I'm going to like this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! ~Lexi~

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 01/03/10 17:56
Chapter: Chapter 3: Stagnant Arguments

Wow, I wasn't expecting that ending. It was very good, though.

I like Lily in this chapter. I like when she says:

“But don’t think I’m going to take “I’ll think about it” for much longer. Sooner or later you’ll have to decide.”

I like that part because I think that it is something that Lily will say. It also set up them not becoming friends, which is good.

I love this chapter and I am very excited for the next one. : )

Author's Response: Hey, Alyssa! I'm glad I can keep you on your toes. :D Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I always worry about whether I keep my characters (Severus, Lily, & James especially) in character; it's nice to hear that I'm doing a good job. Thanks so much! *hugs* ~Lexi~

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 09/12/09 20:29
Chapter: Chapter 2: Disappointing News

BUT she said she loved him, and - no response?????

Author's Response: Haha, very true... so does this mean you like it? lol. ~Lexi~

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/12/09 18:55
Chapter: Chapter 2: Disappointing News

Yay! Another chapter! I reallly like this one too. I adore the begining. This line here

His eyes took in her whole appearance, savoring it as if it was for his eyes only.

Is my favorite. I love when people think/do that. It doesn't matter who does it. I just love it. And having Snape do it is even better. I think your characterization is amazing. Everyone can do atleast one character right, and I think Snape is yours. I love the thoughts that go through his head. You capture him when he is young and not old. I love the reason why he is joining the DE. I could see him thinking like that. Lily is also good too. Her answers at the end were great.

With that, Lily turned and headed to the castle, leaving Severus under the tree torn and confused.

That line was great too. It's a really good ending. I can't wait for the next chapter. They are all amazing! I'm sorry if none of this is making sense. Damn cold.

Author's Response: Alyssa, Thanks so much! I do like that line as well; I totally understand what you said. I never thought I'd be that great at writing Severus but I'm glad I'm impressing you. I guess my reason for writing his character so well is simply because I love me some Severus Snape :D :P. Again, thanks so much for the review! *hugs* ~Lexi~

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/01/09 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hogsmeade

I think I forgot to tell you this in the last review, but I can't remember. I love the title of the story. It's so cool. It's the kind of title that it's so great that you wish you came up wiith and not someone else. The title is what got me to read this story.

I really like how this chapter starts. I really like what he did to James. I may support James, but once in a while someone needs to do something to him. But wouldn't Sirius do something to Snape for messing with James? I also like how he comes up with the idea to ask her out. It's like an amazing idea but then it backfires. It probably would have been better if he just asked her out on a date than doing it the round about way so then there would be no confusion, but it's Snape. :D My favorite part is the ending. Just someone saying that Lily was all over someone else got him to do the stupidest thing ever. I could really see that happening. I just really love your characterization of Snape. He is very believable. I hope the next chapter is up soon because I really love this story and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Awe, Alyssa, thanks! I agree with you about the title thing, that's what it's like a lot to me. Thanks for all the compliments. I really worry sometimes whether or not I'm characterizing the characters correctly. It's nice to know I don't have too much to worry about in that department. :) The next chapter was just sent back to me from Mary-ann, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long. *major hugs* ~Lexi~

Reviewer: Miranda86
Date: 08/27/09 17:52
Chapter: Prologue: The Summer Before Disaster

You may like some of my S/L stories. Some should be posted on here soon, but all will be going on my livejournal.
http://mirandamastin.livejournal.com/

Author's Response: Okay, when they get here I'll probably check them out.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 08/22/09 11:11
Chapter: Prologue: The Summer Before Disaster

I really like this story so far. It's really good. It was soo much fun to read. I hope the next chapter is up soon.

Author's Response: Oh so do I! Thanks for the review! I'm very proud of this. Thanks! ~Lexi~

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