Reviewer: ChosenOneFtw
Date: 09/24/11 1:22
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

I'll make your heart grow x'] That was adorable. I do wish this had been canon. =c Damn Harry's point of view.

Reviewer: Arial Felchem
Date: 09/01/11 21:35
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

Great missing moment!

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 03/10/11 13:26
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

Just reread this story because it makes me smile : ) Please write more H/R fics!!!

Reviewer: sooinlovewithneville
Date: 09/08/10 20:56
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

too cute! a little more setting descriptions would have been great to paint the full picture of this touching scene but otherwise freakinggggg fantastic!

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 08/25/10 20:42
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

this story is adorable! i loved that part of the original book when harry woke up and thought that ron and hermione were holding hands overnight...cute to see their side of the story! a few typos but otherwise a great fan fic!

Reviewer: Ron Riddle
Date: 08/16/10 8:40
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

Both the characters were excellently captured. Exactly the right amount of fluff! Very nice job! Cheers!

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 08/06/10 22:39
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

If reviews make your heart grow, I'm sending this as a token of my gratitude towards thos lovely one-shot. It made mine grow at least one size.
I believe this was a truly lovely recap of what might have transpired that night. The doubts, the fear, the dread in the middle of the night... Harry's snores! *giggles* Good one!

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 05/09/10 1:21
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

Aww :) Very cute.

Reviewer: acciolove
Date: 03/30/10 19:23
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

this is so sweet! and i had always wondered what happened, how ron and hermione ended up holding hands, and i always hoped it was something like this! amazing, nice job. :D

Reviewer: Ascendio
Date: 12/31/09 13:56
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

Loved this story, one of the fanfics that actually really captures Ron, and didn't overdo Ron and Hermione's romance. Very cute, and a bit sad(in a sad it's in the middle of a war way, not in a sad lame way.) This is really well written.

Reviewer: WeasleyMom
Date: 11/29/09 22:15
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

I really like this. Nice job. I like that it really could have happened in canon, even with the big confession. One question though: what behavior at the wedding is Ron apologizing for? I always think of him as just perfect that night... the dancing, the drinks, the compliments... just curious. :) I really like this story.

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 09/04/09 22:46
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

When the only quibbles are over the spelling of a street and the number of a house (you moved them to #2 at the start of the piece), you know someone's done a fine job.

In short, I loved it!

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 08/31/09 16:49
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

wow. that was amazing!! its exactly what i imagined happening!! you're a great writer.

Reviewer: afterglow745
Date: 08/25/09 16:39
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

Aw! That's a missing moment that I often forget about, and you wrote it perfectly! So sweet, and very believable. Wonderful job!

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 08/25/09 16:05
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

Ari darling, you have a bit of thing with canon! :D It's 'Grimmauld Place'. You spelled it 'grimwauld'. Sorry for being the killjoy! I liked the story. Interesting choice of scene. It was developed nicely too.

She had imagined the moment she told someone, anyone, that she truly loved them, would be like fireworks or one of the old, Muggle romance movies she used to watch, but lying on the cold floor of Number Twelve Grimwauld place with her best friend of six years, it didn’t feel like anything had changed except his need to apologize for everything he’d ever done to her.

I loved this paragraph and the casual admission of his feelings. It was very realistic and beautiful in simplicity. It was always how I'd imagined: spontaneous like we saw in the room of requirment.

-Akay

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 08/25/09 15:12
Chapter: Between the Snorting and the Seemingly Imminent Death

Aaahhh you make my heart melt! I'm sneaking reading/reviewing this at work so this is going to be very short/sweet...but it was just that. Short and sweet and lovely.

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