Reviewer: monkeyshine89
Date: 07/07/11 15:50
Chapter: One-Shot

Very cute! That was a sure lot of pregnancy and babies (and I live on a military base, not being pregnant is abnormal). I'm glad you didn't have Hermione pregnant with hordes of children, I never pictured her like that.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/08/10 11:16
Chapter: One-Shot

With the holidays approaching I'm making a little bit of time to read more. I can't believe I neglected this story. I was happy though since it was a very pleasant surprise to find one of yours I hadn't read. And, I'll ask what everyone else has--why is this only a one-shot? Or did you write it this way thinking that you might add to it later? That would be wonderful. I know your fans would love it. In the first place, I love that you had so many people live on. I'll ask my usual question--would it have hurt JKR to let some of these people live? I think the most tragic loss in the series was that of Severus Snape. I'm glad there are authors like you who keep him alive and show this totally unexpected side of him. As always, you've done a superb job of writing. This was a simple reunion and day at the Burrow but you've made it interesting. I love hearing what everyone's doing. I could care less whether it's written according to canon or not. Excellent story and please consider writing more of it. You haven't retired from this universe have you?

Reviewer: BrunetteGinny
Date: 05/25/10 21:21
Chapter: One-Shot

This is work in art. Just make it more clear. Was harry married to cho?

Reviewer: coralynnie123
Date: 09/07/09 1:43
Chapter: One-Shot

I just absolutely love this pairing, and all of the stories you write are absolutely amazing. I honestly never liked the fanfiction much until your stories so please, please, please keep sharing your talents with us!

Reviewer: jirle
Date: 09/01/09 9:49
Chapter: One-Shot

I really liked this story.  I hope you consider making this a story.  I am just itching to hear more!!!

Reviewer: MaddyJune
Date: 08/21/09 23:17
Chapter: One-Shot

Eeee, new story! So pumped to read the rest of it. Your work got me hooked on Hermione/Snape and I love reading more and more of it.

Reviewer: starfighterpilot
Date: 08/19/09 15:17
Chapter: One-Shot

I loved this story - your daughter must have great taste! Please reconsider it being a one-shot and let us know what happens in Diagon Alley!

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 08/18/09 23:29
Chapter: One-Shot

Amazing!!!! I loved it! Another great story. I love the general mood of this story, the details..everything. Awesome job!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 08/18/09 23:10
Chapter: One-Shot

Enjoyable. I get the feeling that every single adult at that party, including Severus, had a hand in setting Hermione up, and that it has very little to do with Snape's new job.

I can perfectly appreciate the concept of a story written to a particular child's taste. I certainly won't argue with your daughter's.

Gee, and Mom only got me clothes...well, they were cute clothes...

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 08/18/09 19:27
Chapter: One-Shot

I really like the story line. It was easy to understand and it made me want to read more. Are there going to upate with another chapter? You are a really good writer.
Ana

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 08/18/09 11:19
Chapter: One-Shot

Hmmmm...why is this only a one-shot?

I don't necessarily think that Snape and Hermione would work, per say, but you always seem to make me change my mind. The situation presented here was no different...he was intriguing, drily sarcastic, and seems to know Hermione well enough to make her interested, push her buttons. And you make the reader want more!

So, umm...more please?

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 08/18/09 9:01
Chapter: One-Shot

I absolutely loved that - and I really really want to read the next bit - and the bit after that....and the bit after that!
In other words....please continue!!!

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 08/18/09 2:46
Chapter: One-Shot

Ha! Just this past weekend I was visiting someone's home and saw a caption I liked: I babyproofed the house, but the kids keep getting in anyway.

Cute story, but I want to know what kind of mischief they get into in Diagon Alley.

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